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January 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is Wow, Zel! I read up to chap 10, and I must say I'm hooked on this...wish I had more free time...wait I have time to do this ::cuddles Arc and Chizu:: Awwww she's SO CUTE! If I could draw worth a damn I would SO draw lil Chizu!!! You rock at battling scenes...I can only beg you to help me when the time comes with my own battling scene (man I suck at those) ::batts eyelashes:: Onegai? Btw, I particuarly love the notes in the end :) This is just an awesome fic...you rock Zel! I saw you posted an untitled fic? I'll go check it out once I finish this one!!! And oh please tell me we get a happy ending! Arc and Kagura deserve one! ::hugs Kagura:: I love Kagura!!! No fair, she's been through so much...please make her happy? Ok enough babbling: I absolutely love this story! Hope to hear from you soon :) Much love and ramen! YM
Btw...when I asked to borrow Arc I didn't mean for a story! (I think that's what you thought) ::blush:: Ya know, Inu and Fluffy chained to my bed in my I-have-no-life existance? I'd like to add him to That waiting list... ::insert hentai little smirk here:: I can't wait to see what happens next! Man Arc is awesome ::smooches Arc:: You rock! Hugs from Argentina!
Btw...when I asked to borrow Arc I didn't mean for a story! (I think that's what you thought) ::blush:: Ya know, Inu and Fluffy chained to my bed in my I-have-no-life existance? I'd like to add him to That waiting list... ::insert hentai little smirk here:: I can't wait to see what happens next! Man Arc is awesome ::smooches Arc:: You rock! Hugs from Argentina!
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This just keeps getting better Zelix :) I love Arc! Poor thing, barely 18 and had to go through so much...and in such little time! Particularly loved the training (always love the father-son relationship :) ) and although I only read up to chap 4 I love Chizu already KAWAII!!! Cloaked people...hmmm...I think I'm the only baka reviewer here who has no clue where this is going...sensing angst here...battling scene wonderful, Zel! Sleepy...long HOT day in Argentina...not happy to clean up the stupid apartment with 38 fucking degrees...will take a shower and sleep...great job! Did I mention I love Arc? ::cuddles Arc:: Wonder if Kagura would share...um nevermind...::cowers:: Hugs! YM
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January 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGHH! I just read chap 2 I can't believe you're leaving me like this!!! ::sobs:: Want more...but I have to run and do some errands (had a bad day at work yesterday, was suspended, I am in a lousy mood to say the least...) I had to read this some more! Reading one chap at a time is killing me! I love this, Zelix! I loved Inu's reaction at Arc's departure, so IC (specially the comment about Kouga...lol) And who was that???? ::wail:: Although I must wonder...how come Arc has scales? Just a thought...I can't wait to read more! Hugs!
YM
btw I updated the last chap, if you want to go check it out please do! :) Thanks SO much for that review :) I'm glad you gave me your idea and that you don't regret it...glad I'm the 'right person' :) Myouga will show up in next chap, I'm desperately trying to write it quickly...hope I don't dissapoint!
YM
btw I updated the last chap, if you want to go check it out please do! :) Thanks SO much for that review :) I'm glad you gave me your idea and that you don't regret it...glad I'm the 'right person' :) Myouga will show up in next chap, I'm desperately trying to write it quickly...hope I don't dissapoint!
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January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I have to run again but I didn't want to leave without leaving my mark here :) I only read the first part and a I'm impressed. I want to know what happens!!!! I particularly love the concept of the Union of the Souls...so beautiful. And Inuyasha as a dad, he and Arc interact so well and it's funny and IC. Poor Kagura...I want her and Arc to have a happy ending! I can't wait to get back and read some more! Great job!
YM
YM
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December 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
In my opinion this is your best fic, please do not give up !
Plot is very uncommon and Arcerdo's dialogue with inquisitors was deep and evocatice.
I like your explanation what happened with all those medieval demons, it's much more reasonable than that "Lucky Ones" style "disguise" stuff.
I think this is a time for a battle with those bees, maybe Arc could master at least Toukijin and denounce himself as a wielder of a demonic sword...
Plot is very uncommon and Arcerdo's dialogue with inquisitors was deep and evocatice.
I like your explanation what happened with all those medieval demons, it's much more reasonable than that "Lucky Ones" style "disguise" stuff.
I think this is a time for a battle with those bees, maybe Arc could master at least Toukijin and denounce himself as a wielder of a demonic sword...
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December 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Am I assuming right in beleiving these moon preists have something to do with the curse? and where is kagura and what happened to her. this is driving me crazy.
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December 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story. how long before arc gets to use the swords he has? really use them, not like he has been using them. try to get the next chapter up soon. i give this story an 11 out of 10. very well written.
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November 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(Sigh) Finally you're back and with an exciting new chap too. Is this new villain a new Naraku or someone
totally new and different. I guess all in due time. PLease write more.
totally new and different. I guess all in due time. PLease write more.
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November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great y!Ky!
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October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Darn you! You leave it at a cliffie and I want to go write my own chappies. Now I can't! Nice twist there, the mysterious figure behind the tree.