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person Paul
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was quite good chapter. It answers my doubts about Moon Priests and their powers.
Surely, they believe in their holy mission to rid the world of youkai , and they behave like medieval inquisitors they are, even if their deeds are unethical from our point of view.
I can't wait for some good action chapter, it would be beneficial to publish it before voting in IY Fanguild starts.
person SHADOW.
schedule July 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
COOL, COOL, COOL...JUST READ THE LATEST CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY AND I HAVE TO SAY THAT I TOTALY LOVED IT....I TRUELY HOPE THAT YOU'LL ADD MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY REALLY SOON, CAUSE I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT....SO PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K.
person Knigh tof the old times
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOO YOU MUST UPDATE ASAP!!! PLZ!!!!!!!!
person B-Boi
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude dis is so cool plz update ASAP
person Hippy of the futre
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dude you have created a new kind of marijuana for me for dat i am grateful and i cant wait to read more so i can get even more stoned then i am
person Inuyo
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well that is interesting but whatever keeps the stories coming is cool by me
make the next have fighting and less talking.
person Church
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice update i loved it
person SHADOW.
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'VE READ EVERY CHAPTER TO THIS FIC AND ABSOLUTLY LOVE IT!!!!!!AND I TOTALY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS TO COME REALLY SOON....[ OOH AND I MIGHT ADD, VERY EVIL OF YOU TO END THE STORY ON A CLIFF HANGER....] SO GET YOUR ASS IN GEAR AND ADD MORE CHAPTERS SOON PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEEEEEEASE!!!!!! OTHER THAN THAT KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK O.K.
person Church
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
SWEET ASS UPDATE I LUVED IT WOOHOO ORKC ON MAN Ok ima answer ur questions.. 1. Hell yeah dey do man hold power an shit lik lightning LIK PALADIN POWER walk over children walk over to the light HURGH BLeahhh dats wat stupid people wuld do but i wuld just say fuk dis lol 2. Jei is cool i mean he has alot of experience right an cool moves the nicknames well its so-so 3. ACTION OH HELL YES I LIVE FOR IT because im a martial artist ya kno
person Paul
schedule June 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally, there is a chapter with a good fight !
I like your characterisation of Arc, previous chapters were not so interesting, but they were necessary for Arc's character development.
As I understand, Moon Priests have similiar puryfying powers to Kagome's powers.
I think that the ability to emit puryfying energy is a inherited trait, and it is not necessary to be good or noble, or even religious to do that.
Simply, kids able to use these powers were chosen to be moon priests or monks or mikos, and they were trained to kill youkai.
Jei the Phantom Blade is somewhat cliche, tessaiga is a phantom blade too !
I can't wait to read about some real swords fight !