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chap 16, not bad, you rushed the love scene and chap(by the looks of the number of typo's)

I like miroku in this story, pay him more attention and will she choose her child hood friend for her demon consort?

That was so cool and its been so long since you updated it was a rare and lovly gift please update soon

Arry

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Hey, I just read all of this today and am wishing that AFF.Net would post the dates for when something was last updated; that way I could find out if I really have the right to rail into you about updating this thing. As it is, I'm going to do it anyway...UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE. This is an AWSOME fic and you should really continue it soon (This is something coming from me, I usually have a strong dislike of any pairings that are not in the original author story lines). If I don't see an update for this in...well I'm feeling lenient so I'll give ya a month, I'm going to use that weird portal thing that my Aunt gave me for Christmas and steel Sesshomaru from your closet, as well as Inuyasha for good measure. Then I'm going to sic the both of them and Haku on you with Kagura's feathers. (Don't ask)

Fantasywriter13

P.S. I don't have anything written thing on AFF, but I have some stuff on Fanfiction.net. If you have free time, AFTER YOU UPDATE, and wish to check them out. Then again if you do, you'll find that I'm not really one to talk as far as updating goes. He he.

That was awsome plz update soon this time it took you forever to update this chappie plz

loves arry

this is awsome and I hope you update soon I love the story. I just started reading your story and thats y you haven't recived aney previous reviews from me. Who sugusted the M/T pairing? That was pure genious! aneyway I loves it and hopes you continue (yes I'm a Newf, got a prop wit it?)

I really really enjoy your story ,as a matter of fact its one of my favorits and I have read hundreds I turely hope you keep going with it for at LEAST another ten chaps and try to update more often I know its hard

Just finished reading all 14 chapters and enjoyed 'em all. (I think some of your "conversastions" are almost more fun than the story - kinda like that!) Very original concept ,oh entertaining one. Homage to The Authoress. The thought of that sensitive lech Miroku ending up in a three way relationship is some how strangely right. (if you can call that right?) be watchin' for ya, have fun!

hey i like ur story please send me a e-mail when ever you update i wounld love to read more of your stuff

Just found the story tonight, enjoyed it very much! Please update.

Kim