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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Zelix, could you do a story with Sesshoumaru and Kikyo as a pairing? I barely find stories with her in it unless she being bashed, and I like that pairing. Or could you do a story with Kikyo and Naraku as a pairing? Wouldn't mind either...
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so good. so yum. but if i may, a small critique. the comments in parentheses are not needed. it is a distraction. but please, please write more.
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Kiranta here agin. How about doing a sequal to the first one(Inuyasha/Kanna), and how about having Sango or Ayame paired up with a custom character. If you want to know what he'll look like, just e-mail me and I'll give a description.
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September 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it so far. Can't wait to read more. I was wondering if you could do a Sesshomaru/Ayumi (Kagome's friend) as a paring in a story? Plotwise....hmm...not sure. Maybe Ayumi could stumble upon a certain demon lord that has been sealed away. And surely, accidently freeing a powerful, cunning, dangerous, and tempting demon could be called a sin?
Let me know if you will.
Let me know if you will.
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September 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter, I could defenitly see myself reading more chapters like this one! I bet you could get a whole story outa the plot from this chapter, few more lemons from now till they're discovered, then they're forced to flee. A good FF story you might be able to use as an idea might be "Union of Souls" by Sol-Li .t's t's about InuTaishou and Izaou (though she goes by another name) and how they meet, same circumstances as this actualy.
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I don't read Inuyasha/Kagome, but for story 2 I'll make a exception. Wonder what got got planed next?
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
let me tell you, I defini wan want a sequel to chapter 3! Oh yes... it was so.... ack! Seriously, it was interesting and so good... it could be its own storyline right there. Nice job.
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That one was great i'd love to see a sequel
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September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A continuation would be great you know :)
A very nice and yet a sad story... Loved it.
A very nice and yet a sad story... Loved it.
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August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O *All 9 tails twitch* That was really GOOD! You described Inuyasha well while he's in his demon form. Wonder who's going to be next in the next chapter.