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for The Sinners

by Zelix

person batgirl
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Even though I didn't like the pairings you had so far, I can tell that you are a really talented writer. So continue with what you're doing, and if you have time, can you write one with Kikyo/Sesshomaru/Naraku pairing?
Thanks
person chanda
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, a blind Kags, very creative I do not think I read a story with kags being blind. Your stories have been very original and I look forward to your next one shot chap.
person lexy
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...that was so hot and sexy..*pouts*..makes me wish i really had a boyfriend.. so plz continue you sexy beast!!
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A new story in progress?

Hell yeah!
person stormfox15
schedule March 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yo wrote a ayame inuyasha storie those mi favs
person Cdnmdn
schedule January 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What can I say. HOT. Absolutly enticing, erotic, and exquisite. Fuck for no experience you sure have a way with lemons. My husband laughed at me when I came downstairs all wet. Asked me if I was dreaming about "Little Tetsiaga".(spelled wrong don't care)LOL Definatly "Lord of Lemons".
person scherezade
schedule January 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Demon Inuyasha-Kagome....wow! You really do have a unique way of writing these stories. Very interesting concept...your version of how Inu-youkai came to exist. I also liked how you allowed Kagome to "see" Inuyasha with her heart despite her physical blindness. I thought that was a sweet touch to an otherwise hot lemon. It's interesting...Inuyasha evidently can understand human speech even though he can't use it himself...
Love beyond borders...beyond the boundaries of society's expectations. Beautiful. And did I mention...nicely hentai :)
person Kiyana Va Sala
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I was going to suggest Inuyasha/Mrs Higurashi. Then I read the thing about only the above pairings. Ah well :P

How about Ayame/Inuyasha? I have no clue how to make an effective AU plot for them, though...
person BluePuppy
schedule September 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... All i can say after chapter three is that you are going to make a woman very happy someday.
person Cassie
schedule September 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Your writing was great keep it up and write more great stories for us. I would love a Kagome/Sess pairing. May be she stands up to him for some reason and he starts to see her as a woman instead of a girl and she's tired of coming in second with Inuyasha.