AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Cocktail Mix

by Atropa

person jackie
schedule December 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i think you should writte more like another spike and sango
person Shizuka KAze
schedule December 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very nice story. Could you do a pairing with Kagura/Sesshoumaru, please? I know it's a rather common pairing, but I've only read one good one. Thank you.
person Inuran
schedule December 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Those lemons are very good ^_^ maybe you should try one with inu and ranko or shamppo Plz!! I REALLY LIKE your stories
person ello_smiles
schedule December 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really luv ur stories alot! i read all the ones wit Sango in them (cus i luv Sango, duh!) and i absolutely fell in luv wit all ur stories! They are just so well put and very sexy, hehehehe:)! I have requests though, ok then...how about more san/sess, and some san/kouga, and of course san/inu! But...here we go...how about from yuyuhakushu: san/hiei, san/yusuke (there are absolutely no san/yusuke pairings), san/kurama, from wolf's rain: san/kiba OF COURSE, adn anyone esle i guess, from Witch hunter robin: anyone really, from buffy the vampire slayer: san/spike, san/angel, and well i can't think of anymore rite now but there is probably alot more that would be great, and who else to do it than u! Well there maybe someone else who could do this so....for all u out there, here is a challenge, well actually a bunch of challenges, enjoy!

-ello smiles
person isis
schedule November 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
half of your story pages have beeen cut in half like a couple chapter's in a few of your storys you might want to read them and fix it
person Ello
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i realuv luv ur sotires in here! especially hte ones that include Sango in em. I think u should Sango/Hiei or Sango/Yusuke! O even better, u could do a very long story with Sango/Hiei or Sango/Yusuke and pu tlots of lemons in it! hehehehe, sometimes i just luv what peoples imaginations can do, lol! Keep up the great work!

-ello
person nutmeg
schedule November 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that i really enjoy these! They are not those annoying continuations that everyone has to wait to be updated, they are merely one shots with a plot. I really like the WHR one and I think you should do a Amon/Rin one or a Vampire Hunter D/Rin one since it would be so cute. ^_^ Just a suggestion from lil ol' me.

-nutmeg
person Sally
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great fanfic. i've liked alot of the story's in this Fanfic. could you plz do a Hiei/Sango they'll a very 'funny' couple.
person Riasha
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OH!!! the hottest real life guy on earth and my second favoritve female character on Inuyasha!! EEEEE!!!!

I loved it, especially Spike's accent. *sigh* I could just hear him saying it. *stares dreamily into space as she imagines Spike with a sexy grin, shirtless, touching...*

ET HEM!! Back to Review! Very nice, but beta would have been a good idea. A couple of tense things... but it was hott, so very hot. oooooo man. Hey, if you ever want to write a sequel to that one as well, I'd be all for it. A third one! YEAH!!! I love the pairing, it has SO not been done before that I know of. or at least not very often if at all.

OK< enough rambling. Later

RyuuAngel
person kisakimiko
schedule October 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Super fly! Not a big buffy fan,but the dialogue in this grabbed me. Thank gods there is a seqeul.