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March 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These are really good! So far, although I am not all that far along on them, they have been good. I just have one suggestion. You should probably put quotations around where the people speak so that we can see a lot easier when they are speaking, and when there are actions. Or, if you have them thinking, do it like this:
'I can't believe he said that!' Sango thought.
But put the part in the quotes in italics. Sorry... I've been learning about this crap in English, so now it's bugging me. *sweakdrop* If you want, I could edit them for you. E-mail me back if you don't mind. ^_^
'I can't believe he said that!' Sango thought.
But put the part in the quotes in italics. Sorry... I've been learning about this crap in English, so now it's bugging me. *sweakdrop* If you want, I could edit them for you. E-mail me back if you don't mind. ^_^
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
better then chocolate.. love it.. as always.. you made my night.. thanks so much!! =)
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sango is so lucky. I wish Sesshomaru was my guardian. * crosses arms and pouts*
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March 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more you made me cry in part of the story... so now you can add more to it... can you do one where they are in a fit with Naraku and some how Sango gets sent in to the past like 100 or 200 years in the past and meet Sesshomaru
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March 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the scenarios you're coming up with are getting better and better as you keep going... and given the fact that they were fabulous to begin with you can imagine just how good they are getting ^_^
in my humble opinion anyway lol
but seriously, you've got to write more about this pairing... there just isnt enough stories about these two out there that are really good - and you make them always come out perfect for each other.
keep up the wonderful work, hun - i hope to see more of your stories of Sango and Sesshy soon ^_^
in my humble opinion anyway lol
but seriously, you've got to write more about this pairing... there just isnt enough stories about these two out there that are really good - and you make them always come out perfect for each other.
keep up the wonderful work, hun - i hope to see more of your stories of Sango and Sesshy soon ^_^
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March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would like to know if you can write a story where Sesshomaru/Sango we fall in love in the past but after the war i go back with Kagome to her time. some how Sesshomaru becomes a Vampire we meet at a night club or what not.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too cool,I didn't exspect a chapter 11 but it was a good surprise and a great chapter.Hope you come up with more
chapters to read.
chapters to read.
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was awesome
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
now that was good like love it, i lol, i cryed , and now i'm smiling ????
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March 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First of all, I would never have dreamed of a detachable tail. That was original. As for you taking down the story, I don't want you to. I really can't see the similarities(perhaps I am sleep deprived or my brain is broken today) but I think that you did a wonderful job. Though my favorite work of yours will always be teaser. So, please keep this up and great job. I would love to see you do one with Bankotsu and Sango or even Jakotsu with Sango.