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by Ookami13

person Anon
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, chapter 3 is kinda messed up.. formatting wise...
person Sintar
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey I really love this story so far!!! I can't wait for you to write some more chapters!!!
person LostArtist
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i finally caught up on the last few chapters and i just wanna say they're awesome!! keep it up!
person LostArtist
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i like ur story but im noallyally a fan of kagome being super mean etc. in the anime/manga she only acts rude with inuyasha when hes being stupid but this makes it sound as though she's evil... i really do like the plot and the idea behind it and ur OC is really cool, but Kagome's my favorite girl character so these past few chapters have been killing me. Is she gonna stay that way ur whole story? update soon please. ur an awesome writer and im still hooked to ur story even if im suffering through the kagome stuff haha