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for Unforseen Gift

by aleaha

person ElecktraHimurah
schedule April 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My goodness!!! You have many spelling errors! But that doesn't meant that the story isn't good. Not one bit. The story is great! Keep on writing! ( =^-^= Myuh! )
person Officer Doofy. I\'m the man with the plan. I drive a real neat copcar for all to see. I want a nice woman to rub my swollen feet. Oo they hurt. Ow! The...... pain....... help.....
schedule April 1, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You really don't deserve all of this torture! This story is fricken funny! Everything about it just CRACKS ME UP!! If I were you, I'd delete all of the reviews that said something bad about the drug use! They didn't have ecstasy back then........... so what. SO WHAT!? It adds some of the greatest humor to it when you add that stuff, ya know what I mean? It's not gonna be 100% accurate to the series! These lame ass people need to go jerk off! This is the funniest story ever!
person vegetas angel
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I am a 31 year old and I have not done anything harder than pot, So won't get that from me. Oh and by the way great ep keep up the great work
person CarolingIsEvil
schedule March 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This chapter had a better plot to it that the others in the point of Kagome taking care of Miroku's airrip. But the use of drugs is pointless. Besides they didn't have ecsaty back then.
you also hadglaring spelling mistakes.
person Fluffy man ooh im so cruel
schedule March 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
uess whos back your biggest Fan Fluffy mann (ooohhhh that was corny) Awesome please Make more Im out of stufffffff and now im bored,see yaaah yo ~_~
person *~*KaItLiN*~*
schedule March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow so far so good
i like the plot
keep writing
*~*Kaitlin*~*
person Kit
schedule March 16, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sorry but the reason no one reviewed saying they didnot like the drug use is mainly because they left thory ory after the scene with drug use came up.

I know I did. I came back to see if the plot was ok besides the drug use. I have to say, it fevoles too much on drug use, I don't like it. There are serious after effects to drug use, adiction, accients during the high and such.Pregnancy from them gettint it on ONLY because they used drugs= in other words they lost control. None of that is being adressed , except they look like total idiots when they use drugs.

The plot be tbe that Kagome deals with being the daughter of a chinese god, but it comes arcoss as 'Hey if life trhows you a curve, use drugs to cope!'

Sorry but I have no interest in the story, I won't be coming back.
person Vegeta\'s angel
schedule March 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
wow just to see Inuyasha stoned is enough for me keep up the good work
person Fluffy man ooh im so cruel
schedule March 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You spelt A few things wrong but other than that your Fine,Im almost done reading the whole story
person Fluffy man ooh im so cruel
schedule March 13, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Awesome everything I wanted one of the best Fics ever , not like the others when the story line was good but FUCK it up by making one of them cheat ob each other or they have a threesome a three way If your one of those young punks^_^.Also Very FUNNY LOL whe they All get Stoned I couldent stop laughing

Ps. Ch 4 was Great you should get stoned more often, Until next time Your man Fluffy Man!^_^