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by aleaha

person SS5DIABLO
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
who this is a rely nice and hot story i would love to see you finish it if you would be so kind. Man the weed need to be good if it fucks people up easy. Also since inu yahs and kagome have borth difernte blood type from a normal person. And i would love to find out where Sess mate is. Tell then see yha and takener easy
person Kage
schedule February 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha thats really funny! plz conintue writting this story it;s really good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Greg
schedule February 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. I like fics where Kagome turns out to be something other than an ordinary human/miko.
person Nacila
schedule December 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
your story is horrible. I could not follow it, tehe spelling was horrible and I cn'tn't get past the second chappie because it annoyed me to no end. I would really appreciate if you took some pride in your work... wow that came out mean. Yeah, in other words I am just trying to say that you need to work on the chappies and not act like you have some wonderful thing right off the bat, you need to work on it.


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person jess
schedule December 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
it's funny as hell to read this and to be somkeing too. Good job
person Pixi
schedule July 6, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The drug use and poor spelling turned me off. I could have probably gotten past the spelling and/or grammer issues, but I find the drug use inexcuseable. I won't bother to finish the story.
person littledarkone13
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
hey this is really good but you got me really pissed of when they started using drugs :( tisk and shame on ou for making them use drugs shame shame shame
person NO POt
schedule May 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
no smoke no pot!!!
person Inu-Libby
schedule May 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yeesh Inu's acting like sess said will you please bare my child. he really needs to chill.
person Step of Faith
schedule May 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this is soo good. why did you stop it????so much cliff hanger...getting frantic