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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
IT WAS A GOOD STORY despite the many grammtial erroes next time use spellcheck
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter koga is a bitch though
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November 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thawas ok but is there a reason their so short
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January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow.. you smoke a lot dont you...
you know... that's not good foryou... haha
You might want to check your spelling dear..
and calm down on those bowls.
^_^
believe me I KNOW
you know... that's not good foryou... haha
You might want to check your spelling dear..
and calm down on those bowls.
^_^
believe me I KNOW
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh and another thing dear..
you really should look into the
effects of drugs...
this is just so misplaced.. i'm sorry i just
cannot read anymore of this shit....
it kind of pisses me off for some reason.
you are totally undermineing inuyasha and
kagome's entire relationship... you know
sometimes drugs .. no wait.. ALL THE TIME
drugs bring you out of yourself.. like
drinking... and its sad to me becuase when
they *fuck* as so many people harshly and
grossly use as the term to describe it...
they arent acting off of their true actions
or feelings....
this is just dispicable and I cannot read it
really... you need to join a help group..
get off the drugs while you still are
salvagable. Drugs dont solve your problems..
they give you a temporary fix in your reality
that in the end always dies... and over time..
it only causes more problems.
Gomen Nasi but I cannot read your work anymore.
\
heather.
you really should look into the
effects of drugs...
this is just so misplaced.. i'm sorry i just
cannot read anymore of this shit....
it kind of pisses me off for some reason.
you are totally undermineing inuyasha and
kagome's entire relationship... you know
sometimes drugs .. no wait.. ALL THE TIME
drugs bring you out of yourself.. like
drinking... and its sad to me becuase when
they *fuck* as so many people harshly and
grossly use as the term to describe it...
they arent acting off of their true actions
or feelings....
this is just dispicable and I cannot read it
really... you need to join a help group..
get off the drugs while you still are
salvagable. Drugs dont solve your problems..
they give you a temporary fix in your reality
that in the end always dies... and over time..
it only causes more problems.
Gomen Nasi but I cannot read your work anymore.
\
heather.
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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow. i'm sorry, and don't take this as a flame, but, i read the first two chapters, and that was it. it hurt
too much to read the rest. one, the characters are completely ooc. two, you go from kagome and inu getting high, to kagome jumpin him, to a little lovey moment, and then back to jumpin again. you have to be consistant. it started out as kagome wanting to get a good ****, and then in the middle "I love you inuyasha" to just.... agh.
i don't think i can say anymore about this.
too much to read the rest. one, the characters are completely ooc. two, you go from kagome and inu getting high, to kagome jumpin him, to a little lovey moment, and then back to jumpin again. you have to be consistant. it started out as kagome wanting to get a good ****, and then in the middle "I love you inuyasha" to just.... agh.
i don't think i can say anymore about this.
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January 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update if you dont i might end up like MoonDream only 6-7 times worse AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH the pain