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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like what you have the story just grabs you and takes you along
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November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like it, hope i don't sound stupid, but who was on the phone? hmm....guess i'll find out soon enough ^^
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August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very secretive for a first chapter. The first thought is the caller was Sesshoumaru but without the second chapter the readers won't know. I do hope you continue with this. Will it have darker themes later on? Is there another threat in the air? If this is a severe case of writer's block then I hope you find a cure soon. I'd love to see how this turns out.
Ja ne!
Nefra
Ja ne!
Nefra
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~~chapter 3 review...
wha?!? i so didn't expect a sess/kag fic with this... i mean... what's up with all those/kag/kag memories? inu didn't pass away did he? i guess i gotta read to noe... so... great story, i'm just surprised... eheheh..e mee message is frm inu huh?
wha?!? i so didn't expect a sess/kag fic with this... i mean... what's up with all those/kag/kag memories? inu didn't pass away did he? i guess i gotta read to noe... so... great story, i'm just surprised... eheheh..e mee message is frm inu huh?
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August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
~~chapter 11 review...
i'm confused!!! i mean... i kinda read between the lines on some parts (which would prob lead to my confusion... gomen nasai!!!) but... first sesshie is telling a story... and then there's a long flashback... and all of the sudden kagome's with them... and kikyou? so what era are they in rite now? feudal or modern? ouchies... brain cramp... nice story though... although... stop making those annoying cliffhangers!!! u start a sentence... and then don't finish!!! like you KNOW what's going to happen, but you won't tell us! i mean... sometimes cliffhangers occur when authors get too tired to continue or to start the beginning of another chapter in the current one... but ur just writing half a sentence and then stopping!!! it just... gets on my nerves... oh wells... i can't write AT ALL... so far...everythin i've written i dun wanna publish... i'm such an amateur! lol... so kudoes for havin guts to post this story! itz got great potential!
-konneko- =^_^=
argh... sometimes i forget to sign my reviews!
i'm confused!!! i mean... i kinda read between the lines on some parts (which would prob lead to my confusion... gomen nasai!!!) but... first sesshie is telling a story... and then there's a long flashback... and all of the sudden kagome's with them... and kikyou? so what era are they in rite now? feudal or modern? ouchies... brain cramp... nice story though... although... stop making those annoying cliffhangers!!! u start a sentence... and then don't finish!!! like you KNOW what's going to happen, but you won't tell us! i mean... sometimes cliffhangers occur when authors get too tired to continue or to start the beginning of another chapter in the current one... but ur just writing half a sentence and then stopping!!! it just... gets on my nerves... oh wells... i can't write AT ALL... so far...everythin i've written i dun wanna publish... i'm such an amateur! lol... so kudoes for havin guts to post this story! itz got great potential!
-konneko- =^_^=
argh... sometimes i forget to sign my reviews!
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
that was mean for doing that lol
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
keep on writing its a good story so far. i want to see what happens!!
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon? I love the stories where Sesshou and Kag meet up in her time. I't 't know why, I'm just addicted to them. And it's one of my fav. pairings! (The other is Kag/Kurama!)
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wonderfully done so far. I prefure longer chaptes, but if that means a longer wait between updates then I say stick with what you've got.
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha!! i knew it!!!!!!!!