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i love this story ive been reading it at work . good job! cant wait for the next chappy , geeez they finnaly kissed! yay !!

:sighs: evil evil person i loved your story so much i stayed up way later then i should when i have a ton of homework to do in the morning x.x;;;;

but i LOVE your story so much i had to read all 8 chapters tonight lol its so great and cute and i love how she reacted and i like how you resolved their missunderstanding so quickly i hate when people drag t out out drives me nuts but you did it perfectly! keep updateing ^^

ooo that stinks that ur sick i hope u get better soon because i just love ur story get well soon keep up the great work

I really like this story, and i hope you add more real soon!!!!!!

yay! you updated! huzzah! very excited! anyways, good chapter nad having inu and kag start to get together is awesome but you cant just abandon the whoel inu ayame thing- you said not one word about it but since they were so chummy in chp7 all of a sudden they're not. resolve that please!!!

aww that was so cuute! yay they r now i guess dating that makes me happy...n damnit i would get pissed off if sumone tried to steal a plot of mine! thats just so stupid if u wanna write think up ur own gosh damn ideas! but this is a very good story! update sooon! adios

What?! Don't know squat about the language? Impossible. Honestly I don't see ANYTHING wrong with ANY of it. And if there were any, so frikken what? Who dropped dead and made them king of Grammar Corrections? Truthfully, I don't even read 77% of the fanfics on here and FF.net (Especially FF.net) because most of these people can't even frikken write if their lives depended on it, I know i'm being a bizatch, but COME ON. An sur sure like atleast 60% DO speak the language, others I just couldn't tell since it was so butchered. Haha Neko is mean tonight. So wat, no one insults Leafe >:O!!!! Rawr.

Oh yea, GREAT chappie :3 Leafe made Neko happy! Yay! Kago And Yasha love yay!

Hope you get better from your cold. :3 love and huggles. Oh and, yesh, people that mimic other people's work should be shot. Its annoying when something you worked hard to do is just so easily swiped up. Good thing that person learnt his/her place! :3 muahahaha. Take Care leafe, keep typing up the good stuff! Your work inspires me. :3

Hey this is really good, i was really wondering what took you sooo long to update, but the wait was worth it, it was a really great chapter and i hope all the ones that follow are the same or even better.
I hoe to read more of this soon!
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First off, feel better!
Second, y'know I never would've guessed that English is not your 1st language. I'm sure your fic has the typos and grammar mistakes that most fics do....but to be honest, your writing is so wonderful and the characters so interesting to read about that I've never noticed them.
Finally, I'm SOOOOOOO happy you updated and that Kagome & Inu can now start exploring a romantic/physical relashipship with one another. I just about died when he was purposely flirting with Ayame and am so glad that's over with!
Can't wait for lemons...but y'know, I'm just happy that they're together....

:)

Whooo hoo! He finally asked her out! Yay. And as for that person who took your story, I think I actually read some of it and was like, 'Hey, that sounds like Roomates...' but yeah. Thats really good you found out and confronted them about it. Get better soon!! Keep those awesome chapters coming!

Oh... and ish curious... What exactly is your native language?? ^^.