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Great story... Just really confused in places.. Only problem is there is serious corruption in your story.. like missing words, missing paragraghs, scenes that jump from one to a completely different without a flow, added numbers, strange symbols, one word that is repeated several times and running on, or letters that are combined that doesn't make any sense. If you are still working on your story ( suspended /hiatus ) and not abandoned it.. Prephaps you can go back and fix up all the problem areas so the story will make more sense.. Like where Inu is talking to Miroku after realizing his error with making Kag feel lower than low at the dinner with Ayame- then suddenly he is startled by seeing Kag open her eyes... How did he get into the room? Why was he startled? Would love to read it again after it is fixed that way I can give a proper review of your story... it looks promising.

hey there..loving the story but it seems it hasn't been updated since last year lol hope to hear from u soon so i may be able to plz read the ending.. it says to be continued..so damn plz dont stop! -_-' hate leaving unfinished stories...ty for writing so well

wow, i'm speechless! i've heard alot of wonderful things about this fic so i had to read it for myself. i love it, you are an awesome, awesome writier. i hope u are still out there, i gotta know what happends next. please update soon i gotta know what is to come

HEY!!!!!!!!!!!!! HOw come u havent updated in so long??? Pls continue!!! I love ur stories!!!!!!!

Please Leafe chan update this story as soon as possible

wow that was hot. i love this story so much! though i think things are moving fast, i don't mind it. if they moved at a normal pace, it would be like a hundred chapters long! :-) anyway, there was one part that i got really confused on. after the dinner party, what was with inuyasha lying curled up in his bead and kagome comforting him? things seemed to skip around a bit then. i was a very confused little girl. :-( anyway, keep up the good work!
~Ashes

i'm only on the first chapter, but it's cute! damn, they have nice dorm rooms. my appartment isn't even that big!!!

please please up date faster or just finish really soon cause i know that i and a lot of other people don;t like halfassed stories so please please finish and hurry up and update thankx -skeezo-

OMG!!! I LOVE this story SO MUCH!!! PLEASE update VERY soon! I can't take the suspense! The plot is wicked! What happens next? Like I said, please update quickly!

Long time no update miss :( and thats sad. But dont worry, this isnt going to be one of this reviews where I threaten to "spork you till you die" or something like that, because thats just plain retarded. I understand that you have a life ( we all do ) and that in your life things may go on that prevent you from writing. Or perhaps you're just suffering from a major case of writers block. Whatever. I just wanted you to know that I really love this story and I really hope that you are going to continue it, in your own time of course. It would be really sad if you didnt. Its really quite an awesome story and one of my favorites to read. If theres anything going on in your life, or you have writers block... or something, I wish you luck and I hope it gets worked out. I just hope you havent forgotten about this story! Heh. Well... yes. Hopefully you are continuing on with it, and if you are, Im looking forward to you're next update. Whenever that might be.