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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was great! This is one of the best fanfictions i have ever read. I love the whole story, (even though I've only read three chapters;) ) I hope you post up the fourth chapter soon, i'm looking forward to the future lemons so dont let me down!
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good story! I'm really liking it so far...hope you update soon!
...wonder what Sango and Kagome's surprise will be?...
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...wonder what Sango and Kagome's surprise will be?...
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's really good so far, I like the plot. But as a suggestion, you might wnt to cut back on the comma use. You have a tendancy to use them when they aren't needed, and it throws off the flow of the sentence and makes things somewhat hard to understand at time. They're mostly used to seperate thoughts, so that if you left out what was between the commas the sentence would still make sense. Keep up the good story though!
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August 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
its really good plz update soon and plz let there be a way for kagome to stay with inu lol plz plz plz plz. (on hands and knees begging)!!!!!1
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August 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... Another cliffish ending. Grrr. I cant wait till the next chapter. This last one was, yet again, very good. I hope Inuyasha doesnt really make Kagome move out. Or perhaps the people in charge of the dorms wont let her change because there are no extra rooms open... I hope the HAVE to keep living together. Well. Update soon! I cant wait.
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good start. So far this fic is really good. Can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work. ^_^
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July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe. What a sexy story. I wonder how the next chaptersss will be. :D And please put Rin with Sesshoumaru! I love that couple. ^^ Post more soon pleasssseeee.
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
well out of all of the storied that i have read i think i like your the best i can not wait untill the next chapter.please post soon or you will kill me because i think that you are a really good writter. keep up the great work!
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NEKO HAS REVIEWED!!!! NOW LEAFE MUST UPDATE!!!! MUST MUST MUST UPDATE!!!@!@!!#@#$!@!!1
Neko is hooked, Neko must have more :( Neko Loves! Yes, I am refering to myself in the 3rd person again, thats cuz im hyper and excited and i loved this story ish KAWAIIIIIII!!!!!!11 Makes me want to go out and fish myself up a roomate and pay him to wear a long white haired wig and ask him if i can call him Inu chan sama hahahahah im so funny. no. :3 NEKO HAS REVIEWED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!! UPDATEEE!!!!! UPDATEEEE?!!?!??!!?!?!?!?!?!?1 :'(
Neko is hooked, Neko must have more :( Neko Loves! Yes, I am refering to myself in the 3rd person again, thats cuz im hyper and excited and i loved this story ish KAWAIIIIIII!!!!!!11 Makes me want to go out and fish myself up a roomate and pay him to wear a long white haired wig and ask him if i can call him Inu chan sama hahahahah im so funny. no. :3 NEKO HAS REVIEWED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!! UPDATEEE!!!!! UPDATEEEE?!!?!??!!?!?!?!?!?!?1 :'(
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July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, a cliffhanger! Shit, this is a tight ass story!...... I mean, I'm looking forward to the next chapters. Keep writing. :-)