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AHHH!! LEAFE :'( You make Neko cry... I read your work in awe. It's so captivating. And yes, writting alot probably does prevent writters block, but I don't know what happened, I'm blocked :( what's your secret?!
Anyhow, Neko is very hooked, I loved the end of this chapter how he reveals himself, now im panicked to stalk twice as much for an update. I admire you Leafe :P keep up the good work. Love and huggles to you :3

You are evil!! How could you cut it off like that?? Oh!! The inhumanity!!

WOW great fic love these kind ur a great writter and u know how to entertain ur readers i loved every word 5 stars two big thumbs up dont leave me hanging update soon i be sure to review everytime and read every chapter love it just love it keep it up
Adina

wow. u have an amazing talent for writing my friend. this is one of the best stories i have read in a very long time, and it is definately is holding my interest...keep it up. please continue and get another chapter up soon.


cheers. *raises glass*

R: You cheater!

Z: Oh god, Here we go again.

R: You cheater!

Z: She's just a little disappointed.

R: You cheater!!!

Z: Never mind, she's starting to tear up.

R: Leave us hanging by our necks!!!!!!!!

Z: She means you cliffed us.

R: Oh the horror!!

Z: Just smack a bottle of Smirnoff's on her head and she'll rewind

R: Will the next chapter let us fall or tighten the noose? Or will the Great Chapter Seven play Robin Hood and rescue us from our fate?

Z: I'm more of a Spider-man person.

R: Yeah...he's hotter but come to think of it, Batman's my boy!

Z: Straying a little aways from Inu-Yasha here.

R: *sighs* He's so addicting.

Z: You're scaring me... : No: Now if only I had some cheesecake-

*WHAM!*

Z: Ray-mon is not availible at the moment. Please leave your fanfic at the beep.

*BBBBEEEEELLLLLLCCCCCCCCHHHHHHH!*

R: *swirly* no turkey

Z: Must have hit her in the gut to hard.


IT ROCKED! The whole Kikyo handjobby thing was a bit disturbing (who would let that thing touch you), but we like the chapter notheless. Although it seemed just slightly "unfulfilling", only a tiny bit, we have high hopes for the next chapter and are *patiently* waiting for it.


R: How long do we have to sit here for?

Z: Until Leafy remembers the little people from her throne of high praise. (Just Kidding!!)

WE'RE NOT WORTHY! WE'RE SCUM! WE SUCK!!!

dude, so far...you haven't risen a bit of disappointment in me and I LOVE YA FOR IT! You update frequently, good lengthy chapters, one SWEET plot, hilarious situations and basing it on one of my favourite pairings of all time. Get chapter seven going and don't disappoint the audience!

Come on! I can't wait till the next chapters! This sounds cool.

Your so evil how could you leave it there you have to update soon!! Im always checking this stor to see if theres an update.....so PLZ UPDATE SOON SO I CAN FORGET ON HOW EVIL YOU ARE!!!!

but but butbut argggggggggggggg how could u ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh come on plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz write more plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

Yes, yes you ARE so mean. Sooo...is this when Kag accidently triggers the release of Inu's concealment spell? Do you have an update list? Excellent story by the way. When does the bad guy come in? Naraku, perhaps? Maybe as a teacher...it would be funny if he were a priest or something like that. But...an evil priest say, bent on ridding the world of demons and hanyous, for some jacked-up reason - like they killed his parents, or pull a Hitler and he's bitter cuz he's a hanyou.. Hmmm..his father was a demon who raped his mother (I know you said no rape, but you could put it out as being "This is what happened." and not go into details.) and his mom is bitter and a little psychotic... Since he recogonizes Kag as a shrine maiden...sorry. I have runaway fingers, but I'll stop now. Excellent story, do post soon!

FR