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for Not Meant For Me

by XxPlutoxX

schedule November 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My poor baby!!! I loved your fics, and I hope you can get through this enough to keep writing. You have a great gift, and a great heart. Keep your chin up dear. We're all pulling for you. <3 Cat
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww... i love it. he waited for her. great fic! i absolutely love it!
schedule February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i think this one shot is perfect how it is honestly. i'm sorry for your hardships and i'm sure it hasn't goten better over the time. this was a wonderful peice of work though. i think you really touched on some raw and basic emotions here that people lose at points. i wish you happiness.
person Jezebel796 (not logged in)
schedule November 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Mmm So great. I also loved the bit from the Queen of the Damned soundtrack. Keep up the great work!
person Kori Sekuchi
schedule July 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I feel your pain. The same thing happened to me. After six fucking years of devotion, I found out that he was cheating on me with some bitch who worked for me! You can bet your ass I fired her! And now i'm left taking care of our five year old son all on my own. Back to the point here, I love your stories. Keep up the good work!
person ChromiumBlue
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I've read your AN. Im so sorry that thats has happened to you. I hope that you'll find someone to help you heal your heart and to love your little girl. Best of luck to you Pluto. May God keep you in his hands and in my prayers.

Mackenzie
person drake220
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh, my god! i'm crying for you! THAT BALLESS PIECE OF SHIT! How dare he?!?!?!?!?!?! Of all the freakin' nerve!!!! seriously, some men should be castrated and he is one of them! Never in all my life have i heard such drivel: 'i'm not happy'- you pissant neandert tak take some goddamn prozac and suck it up! what was he, depressed?!?! MORON! i am so angry for you.....lord, men can be such shit. and whats this about, raising the kid on your own? wheres his child support? sell his penis for money, thats my idea. just chop it off and sell it on ebay.......course, the smaller it is the less you'll get, but hey! even a little money is better then none. good luck finding a job, god watch over you and your daughter. my religion has a saying that whenever anything bad happens, it happened b/c god iseither saving you from something worse or punishing you now to reward you greatly later on. everything will work in tin the end. remember-shits like that asshole don't deserve to lick the shit from your toilet.
person A.J.
schedule May 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pluto, I'm so sorry that your life is down in the dumps right now but I wanted to let you know that you write wonderfully elaborate and well written fanfics that I enj enjoyed for a while. The fact that you're even updating at all with everything that's going on in your life proves to me and all your readers how emotionaly strong you are and that fact is very obvious in your writings. I wish you and your daughter the best of luck in the future and that one day you willl find your own silver haired hanyou that will love you forever! :) lots of prayers and hugs!!
person Hanyou Slave
schedule April 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am so glad you returned Inu to his hanyou self. I actually laughed out loud at the end. Great story!
person Anon
schedule March 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey i liked your story, and i definately agree with you that QueeQueen of the Damned soundtrack rocks. I love how you put inuyasha in leather...mmmm... :D