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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Why haven't you updated?
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October 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha is a "Inu" hanyou. You call him a neko, which means cat. He's a dog hanyou.
I want Kikyo-Jr. to be paired with Inuyasha.
I want Kikyo-Jr. to be paired with Inuyasha.
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October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I want to see loving, sweet lemons later.
I want an Inuyasha/Yokai-Kikyo pairing. PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!
Great concept by the way.
NARAKU MUST SUFFER! KILL THE SICK PERVY CREEP!
I want an Inuyasha/Yokai-Kikyo pairing. PLEASE! PLEASE! PLEASE!
Great concept by the way.
NARAKU MUST SUFFER! KILL THE SICK PERVY CREEP!
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May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a very....interesting story. I read the whole story without skipping any parts. Aren't you proud of me? Yes, it was quite disturbing, but I've read stoires somewhat similar to that before, so I was kind of prepared for it, although you do take the cake when it comes to violence. I'll be looking forward to the second chapter. ^_^
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April 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit.
Well, I cannot say that you didn't warn me, truly, I cannot. I don't think that anything could have prepared me for what I just read though. It was nothing if not.....inventive. I cannot in all honesty say that I have never written anything similar, because I have, repeatedly, but that, that was something else entirely. Congratulations. In all my time of reading fanfics and writing my own stories and whatnot, never have I ever actually felt queasy from something that I read. Inventive. Truly sadistic. Genuinely twisted and morbid. It was the skin bit that got me first, then the bit with the intestines......
Oh yeah, I think I need some water now.
I honestly do not know how you are going to manage to reconcile them, if you even intend to do so. I am genuinely interested in finding out how things turn out, so click on my email and let me know if you are continuing this story at any time.
Oh yeah, and a word from my muse to yours......
This is truly something worth applauding, the fact that you got her to write it, and the fact that she actually posted it!
Well, I cannot say that you didn't warn me, truly, I cannot. I don't think that anything could have prepared me for what I just read though. It was nothing if not.....inventive. I cannot in all honesty say that I have never written anything similar, because I have, repeatedly, but that, that was something else entirely. Congratulations. In all my time of reading fanfics and writing my own stories and whatnot, never have I ever actually felt queasy from something that I read. Inventive. Truly sadistic. Genuinely twisted and morbid. It was the skin bit that got me first, then the bit with the intestines......
Oh yeah, I think I need some water now.
I honestly do not know how you are going to manage to reconcile them, if you even intend to do so. I am genuinely interested in finding out how things turn out, so click on my email and let me know if you are continuing this story at any time.
Oh yeah, and a word from my muse to yours......
This is truly something worth applauding, the fact that you got her to write it, and the fact that she actually posted it!
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February 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh god.........
such sadistic things...
such sadistic things...
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February 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn...that was sick but in a good way.
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November 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
other than the fact you kept calling him a 'neko' youkai, it was a good story. he's actually an 'inu' youkai. as in INUyasha.
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October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He he he i likes it. You have clear character deliniation and even though kikyo (d is is the same as kikyo you proved her to be quite diffrent and unique. I like the diffrent side of goshiki although i doubt that is what he was relly like. It should naraku as being very deviant when i dont thin narku actually like blood and guts he just likes emotional pain and anguish. He would torture some one by torturing the thing they love most. But it definatly made the story interesting
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September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All in all, very well written. I found one typo, something like "was denied to him," which should have been "to her."
From that, you can probably tell, I read the lemon, and I was disturbed. Not too badly, but more than I expected, considering that I was prepared for it. Although, the analyitical side of me that was unaffected by the horror noticed that it was very original, and also well written. Good diction for... yeah. Still, it's the most disturbing thing I've ever read. I can see why you got so few reviews.
Somehow, the "whee" in the closing author's note disturbed me more than the whole lemon (probably because I wasn't prepared for it). As if the effort to prove that you weren't insane made you seem schizophrenic instead...
At any rate, if you really are going to continue this fic, the "get out" author's note should probably suffice. I was originally typing "I strongly suggest that you cut out this dark part, and have it separately accessible, as a prefix," but now that I think about it, most people probably read the lemon because there wasn't anything else to read. Once (if ever) you have more chapters, it shouldn't be a problem. Just make sure you specify that the later chapters aren't bordering on dark and horrifying, that they're more based on action, etc. People might think that there's always going to be that feeling that there's some horribly evil section looming. Then again, that might be just me, because I knew that it was there.
How long do you estimate before you post another chapter? I wish to see Yuukaku in action. In all fairness, I estimate four months for my 1st fic to be posted, six weeks for my 2nd. That should be enough time to get over the Ranma.
But enough of my rambling. Those muses sure are impressive. Available at discount rates, you say?
From that, you can probably tell, I read the lemon, and I was disturbed. Not too badly, but more than I expected, considering that I was prepared for it. Although, the analyitical side of me that was unaffected by the horror noticed that it was very original, and also well written. Good diction for... yeah. Still, it's the most disturbing thing I've ever read. I can see why you got so few reviews.
Somehow, the "whee" in the closing author's note disturbed me more than the whole lemon (probably because I wasn't prepared for it). As if the effort to prove that you weren't insane made you seem schizophrenic instead...
At any rate, if you really are going to continue this fic, the "get out" author's note should probably suffice. I was originally typing "I strongly suggest that you cut out this dark part, and have it separately accessible, as a prefix," but now that I think about it, most people probably read the lemon because there wasn't anything else to read. Once (if ever) you have more chapters, it shouldn't be a problem. Just make sure you specify that the later chapters aren't bordering on dark and horrifying, that they're more based on action, etc. People might think that there's always going to be that feeling that there's some horribly evil section looming. Then again, that might be just me, because I knew that it was there.
How long do you estimate before you post another chapter? I wish to see Yuukaku in action. In all fairness, I estimate four months for my 1st fic to be posted, six weeks for my 2nd. That should be enough time to get over the Ranma.
But enough of my rambling. Those muses sure are impressive. Available at discount rates, you say?