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by Shilley

schedule May 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It was good. Lemon very juicy *wink* Although, I hate reading
stuff thats in one paragraph. which you did make a couple short but for
me Its just hard for me to read. Maybe its cuz i hate reading, only like
lemons and limes and... well some romance, but anyway thats not even
books, its fanfics. So yeah. But good. I rate it 4 you did really good,
wish there was a 4 and 1/2! lol

Twisted
Kitty
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Aku and Angel Kitty really enjoyed reading it! Thanks!
person ShAtTeReDgLaSs
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dude, that was so freaking hot. Made my insides squirm. I loved it, i wish people would write more aggresive fics like this one. Job well done.
person YashKag
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This fanfic was a nice one to read. There were no spelling errors as far as I could tell which is nice and the lemon scene between Kagome and Inuyasha is intense. I have been trying to find a lemon where somone doesn't completely destroy every word they type and has some nice intensity to it. So, just so you know this is a good fanfic and thank you for not fucking up the spelling to the point where I refuse to read anything you write. So please write something else so I can read it!
person sisana
schedule August 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes. I definitely liked that story. I think I'll reed your other stroies :)
person Setsunna2
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yum lemon. piease do write more.