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for Simple Touches

by lammora

person Midnight_Mistress
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Alright.....this is just torchure now....i wish for more....lol....u got my attention...let me know with an e-mail when u got a new chapter up...thanks...^_^....
person chillkat
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What in the hell is this about, i want more chapters dammit. You should not write so good if you are going to do this to me.
person Cassie
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I have to say is WOW!!!! allyally like your story can't wait for chapter 2. Keep up the good work, for a fellow inuyasha writer. Really good stuff. ^____^
person No One Knows
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good so far
person KatGrrrrl99
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Please write more!!!!
person animegirl007
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it....that devil Sesshomaru...paying to have the elevator stop.Oooooo I love it.........Well, to answer you question, what are wrote in chapter 1 is a lime, and lemon is the full sexual act.....I could wait until you UPDATE SOON.....PLEASE...
person J. Cloud
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great start :) can't wait for more
person drake220
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so stan saw them huh? lucky stan! that ending line was hysterical! good job adn unpdate soon!
person pao
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
way cool!!!keep it up
person crys
schedule July 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
please continue the story...soooo juicy....sooooo goood can't wait for more. please "keep them cumming"

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