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by lammora

person fdsdfs
schedule February 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
sesshomaruandrin.blogspot.com
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person Sesshomoru Princess
schedule January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! You know, maybe you shouldn't have Miroku as such pervert when he is married because it same thing as being unfaithful to his wife.
person Ru-Doragon
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Really bad grammer and spelling.
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice and funny too..
person Birdie
schedule August 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Inuyasha should learn from his brother. Hahaha. Update more! And I request more Sess/Rin action.
person animegirl007
schedule August 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! You're back!!!!!! Welcome back and don't you ever leave again ;)..... I'm still loving this stories, and INUYASHA!!!! don't walk on in when people having a little fun!!!!!!!!Can't wait until you're next chap....
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was very good. got my hope's up for a good seen. damn that inu.. lol lol. looking forward too the next time they get stuck.
schedule August 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like this story very much. There are some weird errors in the first chapter (maybe a computer problem?) and some grammatical/spelling errors in the second and third that make the story a little difficult to read. Otherwise, very nice!
person jenn2118
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it please update soon ok!!
schedule August 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good for your first lemon, in spite of the few typos. Still a lime but I do look forward to when Sess/Rin finally go all the way and she get's the family mark you mentioned. Look forward to the next chapter.