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u should really cut down on the japan words... all it does is make us have to scroll down to see what ur saying so please cut out with the crazy words an just use english like 98% of ur story is its much easyerr to read and hmm i have to say inyuasha is one of the stupidest people i think can ever be written into exsistance.. i mean he has a girl who would fall in love with him in a second if he wasnt such a ass to her the hole time.. an then theres shippo... he needs to grow up an stop being a lil annoying tick.. lol

You put up 2 of basic needs!!! Thats over kill on the cliff hanger and how do you forget about having half of your face scratched off by poison claws?! After he gets better she needs to kick him in the balls again... Update your story and for the love of god do it soon! Just like all the other good authors out there, you're tourturing your readers. : )

very good....no great! one little question though....do u relize tjhe chapter 13 and 14 are the same??
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aawww, come on dini, i was really into this story until the 14th chappie. please update soon and by the way....great story. keep doing whst u do best and :-D smile

aawww, come on dini, i was really into this story until the 14th chappie. please update soon and by the way....great story. keep doing what u do best and :-D smile

Well, by reading your other reviews, I see that it takes you a while to update. This bothers me because I really like this story so far and I want to keep reading it. But I hate waiting weeks for chapters. I promise Im not trying to sound like a bitch, Im just being honest. Speaking of being honest, I guess I should actually review your story :) I think that your idea for the story is very creative. You are a talented writer as well. Im excited to see where you are going to go with this story. Just so you know, I hardly ever review unless I really like the story. So please keep updating, and keep up the good work *wink

Updaaate!!! This story is so wonderful! I...need...more! ::rocks back and forth:: Keep it up!!!

Huh, nice cliffy. I wonder what Kagome will do when Inuyasha wakes up. Update, if you please. But, since it's the holidays, (unless you don't live in north america) you should be able to update pretty soon.

Kya, you know that saying that is offencive to Inuyasha?

Update soon! I love the amount of detail you've put into this, and the cliffies!

Hey please continue soon I wanna see what happens to Inu and if she's going to mate with and what Sesshomaru's gonna do when he wakes ple please hurry.