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This is such an excellent fanfic. I started reading out of intrest of Kagome and Inuyasha pairing and was most attracked to the title, which I was thrilled when it indeed contained Inu/Kag pups. There are not enough fanfic beyond Kagome having pups.

I do have a couple of comments though. I would have loved to have had a chapter when we find Kagome and Inuyasha and the twins going back to the modern era for supplies. I would have liked to have seen her families reaction to seeing Inu after the years and how he was with the twins. Also would have like to have seen the reactions when they found Kagome was with pup. I also would have liked to seen some mention from the time Sango learns she is pregant and when Kagome admits to Sessy that she is with pup again, of how they are doing with the traveling and what they are starting to look like...ie showing and how Mirku and Inu are dealing since both have not been thorugh this part before.

I look forward to reading the rest of the fanfic and can't wait to see what happens to our group and couples.

I was wondering what happened to Kirara. Anyway, excellent story. It stays true to Takahashi's style. It might even be good enough to be part of the real series. Congratulations.

Dammit, finish the damn story!

Will you ever update this story? I love it and really want to read more about Kagome and Inuyasha. And you kind of left the third pup hanging. And lets not forget the other couples, I want to see Sango's baby and read about Kouga and Ayame's first night. You have a wonderful writing style, and I can't wait to read more.

I love this story is like I'm watching the show in my head. Your a amzing writer and I wish u started where u left off I would just start and pick up where u left off but I can't because I'm not a good writer. The story would go from a 5 to a 1. E-mail me if u need any ideas.

Plllllllllllllllllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaassssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee update....please?

First of all, i love this story. Its totally awesome. Allright, so, i know that this was written like forver ago so you probably wont be updating again, but just in case, i have a few comments. One, i think you should translate some of your japanese phrases. The yaseokami thing is confusin me, since i thought kami meant "god" or something. Some things, like baka, and names are obvious, but if you think people might not know it, you might just want to insert a note. Two, whats with shippou? He wasn't even really mentioned till like chapter 22. Kagome was practically like his adoptive mama in the series, wouldn't he be more involved in something like this? Three, could you maybe show a little more affection between inu and kag? I know they're mates, but based on what we see of their relationship, i can hardly tell why. Give us some action! Some cuddling, or affection, or even sex. Somethin! Allright, i reeeeeaaaaalllllllyyyyyyy hope that you will do updates at some point.

P.s. i only give constructive criticism to stories i really like =o)

Do u know how LONG I've been waiting for an update. Now don't get me wrong I LOVE this story but I wish u would update it.*thanx*

When r u gonna update? Cause I can't wait to find out what happens next.

this is great please update