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for Correcting Mistakes

by YoukaiFate

schedule October 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
HAHA i ACTUALLY really liked this! lmao.

i was a tad sad that there wasn't more.

person Kat
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more please!!!!
person Animefreak242
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was a short chapter, but you get the gist of what happened (especially since this is only the first). Hojo seems even slower than in the show. And that's saying something. Kagome seems a little upset about it. But what I want to know is what led up to this? How did Kagome just decide to sleep with Hojo? Especially if she doesn't even like the dunce.

About the football reference... The endzone is where you score a touchdown (and a touchback, but that's a different story). ^^;;;; Baseball is usually used as a reference for sex (since it's a universal sport and makes more sense).

On to the next chapter I guess. Ja mata!!

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl
person sel
schedule July 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMMmmmmm MMmmmmmm Mmmmmmmmmm

Kagome girl, I would give my ddd's to be in your place right now chicklet!

Hot hot hot

Sel~
person Mija
schedule July 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oow wow that was good..lol...*whew* soo why did Inu not get mad that Kagome was no longer a virgin??? wouldnt he be a little mad?? jealous??/ just curious..hehe great chap loved it..huggles and smiles Mija..:-)