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You're evil... that was an evil way to end a chapter... but i love it.

oohh i like keep posting chapys!!!ppllleeaaassseeeee!!!!

Intresting start! Can't wait to read the next part!

Wow... i remember when i emailed you this idea long ago... i never thought i would actually see it but... excellent work, that's all i can say.

I really like this story! Please continue. You have my interest! Good luck with it!

Souta and Rin, they might look cute. Can't wait for chapter 3 to be placed up.

This sounds really good! I really liked these chapters! Please update soon!

Hello Atropa, it has been awhile. I believe I have the perfect evil in which Souta can provide invaulable computer hacking and identification forging skills. It is an evil that so easily seduces men with its power. J.R.R. Tolkien called it the One Ring, the nipponese called it Pikadon. It was use twice in anger against two peaceful cities of Hiroshima and Nagasaki. It is an evil that has to brought down by love as force of arms are not enough to end its threat as it is too late for that. If you wish to get an ideal, my story Redemption is an excellent starting piont as Pikadon is once more gaining power. The late Brigadier General Ferebe has feared of its return till his dying breath. Well see for yourself...

Awesome! I love the idea of Souta+Rin!! As long as they're older. Otherwise they shouldn't be doing nothing but holding hands! ;D