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Finally, a new chapter to this one... i love this, hope to read more soon!

I'll tell you a short storth ath a hidden message for Souta. In 1965, I was a young idealistic 2nd Lt. in charge of a section of 155mm Howitzers. In that year the NVA Howitzers outranged ours by two thousand yards. They pressed that to full advantage, culimnating into what my band of brothers call the Sre Ka duel. For three days we fired at each other. As men fell around me, Capt. Richer ordered us all into the bunker waitwait Air support. It might of been stubbornness or stupidity, but I stayed at my Gun and and manned it myself. Now the shells themselves weigh 102 pounds and the powder 45 pounds.. As I was only one man, I could only fire 1 round every two minutes. For five hours as Nva Artillery continued to search for me and came very close too if a shell were not a dud!!! Finally a came across a crate that contained Base Bleed Rounds, that had been mislabeled Beehive. I could now search out their guns with the added 3000 yards on the round 50 pounds of weight. My first shot in the after action reveiw hit their fire control center. The second hit their supply dump. After that round a shell landed close enough to uplift me from my position and wreck the gun. Luckily I breathed out... I switch to a new gun that wasn't damaged and fired four more rounds before P49 Sky Raiders came in and rocketed the area of the guns. For all that I recieved the Silver Star with combat V and a promotion. of atteattery's 40 men. 25 died and the rest were wounded. I lost part of my right ear. From that day on we labeled ammunition ourselves.
Semper Fidelis
Brigadier General Thomas B. Golladay jr USMC (Ret)

P.S. Sometimes when out on a limb we find withen ourselves absolute endurance to preservere when others who we think stronger cannot due to hesitation or luck of the draw.

OOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHH i mostly like sesshy/rin but i like this one also i think i found a new fav writer!! keep up the great work!!

*squeels* Rin & Souta are so cute together! I love this story, can't wait to read more!

Hey, this story is good. I like what you're doing with this because there aren't a lot of stories about Souta or Rin as adults. I'm not sure if you've written a story with Sesshoumaru and Rin as a couple, but I'm so glad that this one isn't. Rin is his pup, so it always grosses me out to read stories of them together.

Anyhoo, keep up the good work!

A Flute??????????????? Okay..................................SempSemper Fidelis

I love this story keep up the good work.

I'm loving it, not because it was my idea but because it's good!

This is pure and simple crap.

If not what I suggested, try a combination of it with terrorism, but ultimately Souta would prove more powerful as he has the knowledge that aims the on aon and that will be key. Further Souta need to get Rin a permit to carry the swords lest she be arrested by Tokyo police, being from a shrine family it won't be diffucult to obtain one for her.
Semper Fidelis