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for Rin's Adventure

by Atropa

schedule November 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^_^ its ok if your not good at those kinds of scenes no one is perfect, but it was still a good chapter. Heh heh..I have a feeling that the best part is still to come! Heh heh...Until next time! ^_^
person Scorpinac
schedule November 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
And next time we get the sex, right? You've teased us long enough, dammit! Unless, of course, the flute/Ken Fue was in fact just a small fish leading up to an even bigger fish... Oh, I really nead to learn to stop when I'm ahead...
person Tom
schedule November 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah run with it.
schedule November 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I am reviewing to make you happy >:-D Anyhoo, this was nice if a bit short. The little scene between Rin and Souta more than made up for that. Heh heh...^_^ Anyoo nice chapter and all. Until next time! ^_^
person Tom
schedule November 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hello.
person ducusdraconis
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i am happ see see trhat you are back to writing. especially with this story. I have missed your writing, it has a way of bringing out a passion most writers lack. I can't wait to read more
schedule October 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh! Very nice! I like it so far...I can't wait til you update this. I have a bunch of your stories read or bookmarked, thats how much I have enjoyed reading your stories...A Rin and Souta fic..Who would have thought that they'd pair up well? Well...obviously you did or you wouldn't have written this. ^_^ Until next time! ^_^
person Kouji
schedule August 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Where the good hentai it's just near it I want hentai action, and again good story & storyline, but I want hentai!!!!!!!!!!
~Kouji
person da rin-chan
schedule August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aawwwww kawaii ending for the chappy!!! plz continue the great work!!
person Tom
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't kill Souta, give him an opening (chuckles)
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