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for Wish

by Tairyn

person Ashcat
schedule September 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this story.. very cute and fluffy!
person Wow123
schedule July 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
There is very interesting, but spell check next time, also don't have your sentences in one large block its very hard to read that way. Maybe, break your story up into a few chapters, instead of one big one, that way you could get more reviews. All in all for your first attempt it waas o.k....I hope you do some more...