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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats a really really good story!! but i was shocked that it wasnt compelted!!! plz plz OH GOD!!! PLZ!!!!! UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!
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May 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A good beginning, and an intriguing idea. However, it's obvious these chapters are all first drafts, and un-beta'd ones at that. Your stories will be improved if: a) after writing each chapter, you allow a couple days to pass, then review it with fresh eyes. Then, b) send the chapter to a beta to catch the stuff you missed. Then, after this process, c) it's time to post the chapter publically.
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it, ive been reading it since the first posting, and i know u have a hard time finding somewhere to write but dont u think its time some type of update was posted? its been awhile ur killling us out here
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April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it love it love it, ive been reading it since the first posting, and i know u have a hard time finding somewhere to write but dont u think its time some type of update was posted? its been awhile ur killling us out here
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April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God!!! why did you stop there........oh my god!! I think I can't sleep at night thinking about what will happen to the story.........so please have mercy and post the next chapter..........please, please I'm begging you!!..........anywayz all I can say is your story is the most romatic, intrueging and beautiful I ever read..........Good luck and keep up the good work...I'll be waiting for the next chap.. Ja Ne
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I would like to know who will take care of the children too*winks*
Can't wait for more..please please please update soon.
Thank you! ! !
Can't wait for more..please please please update soon.
Thank you! ! !
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March 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I love your story can you plz finish the next chapter i will await the next chapter
*Kagome*
*Kagome*
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March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm a fanfiction user, and I really like your story but what happened to chapter 12, it goes from 11 to 13. Just thought you would like to know.
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March 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAVE U FORGOT ABOUT US, YOUR TRUE READERS?? PLEASE COME BACK!!!! wRITE!!! uPDATE!! we need u!
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February 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this stroy. I hope you finish it.