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for Predestination

by chillkat

schedule December 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This story is an addiction!! It has been a long time since you have updated but I am still holdiing on to the hope you finish this story! This is soooo good that I can't forget it! Please give your readers an ending!!! I cant give the ending this story needs. Only you can!! I can't do it justice in my mind! So many unfinished endings to all the characters!!!! Show mercy to your readers!!!!

schedule November 6, 2018 at 12:00 AM

I have been following this story since you first posted it in spark! Please come back and give your readers an ending! My own mind cannot create the ending that these characters deserve! 

person sherry15
schedule November 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I found this story originally on ff.net, but it disappeared when they tightened restrictions. Then I was surprised that it was on aff.net. It was even updated. Sadly, I have been following this story since 03-04, and I am disappointed that it hasn't been updated. I was really hoping that the rabbit Keito would have a happy ending. My imagination cannot possibly lead me to the conclusion of the story. I hope that I won't have to keep looking for this story to be updated.
person bella21
schedule August 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I remember when I first found this story years ago, and ever since then it's been my all time favorite one. Its really funny how certain stories just stay with u, even after all this time I always find myself coming back and re reading this one. I know its been forever since an update but do u think that if you arent going to finish (which would just be a crime since you're so talented) that you could maybe let us know? Because even tho hearing that would totally crush me Id like to know so i stop hoping.
Really though whatever you do this fic was a great peice of writing and i loved every second spent reading it!
person soulous
schedule July 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I lost track of the story about three years ago and just found it again. I want to know if you will ever finish the story. I am hoping that Keito has a happy ending of some sort.
person Anon
schedule July 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule April 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Anon
schedule December 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
o.k
person Can't Wait
schedule November 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Update soon I can't wait to find out wat happens with the female general and Inuyasha. Also the servent and head general.