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September 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! :::claps::: Next segment soon, I'm really hooked on this storyline! Looking forward to reading what happened to everyone who is no longer alive/mentioned!!
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September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I am really impressed with your story! Yeah, I know. So many of us are just looking for the 'juicy yaoi' right away, but I am imagining where your story is heading and I think it's a great plot and you have set it up nicely. Just for ease of reading I would suggest breaking up your paragraphs a little. ONLY a format critique! Not a single critique for the actual story! Can't wait for more!
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July 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, damnation!!! The majestic quality of this work of erotica is so fuckingly delicious! Hm...
Will there be a yaoi scene featuring Shippo and Kit? Not that the excellent gender tranformations are disturbingly wrong, oh hell Far Far from it. I just want to see some coyote-on-fox action! You know, just two kakkoi demon men buffing each other! =^.^= Hm... Now that I mention those two, I wonder what the kitsune and his exceedingly openminded host are scheming against the unsuspecting demon dog...
Will there be a yaoi scene featuring Shippo and Kit? Not that the excellent gender tranformations are disturbingly wrong, oh hell Far Far from it. I just want to see some coyote-on-fox action! You know, just two kakkoi demon men buffing each other! =^.^= Hm... Now that I mention those two, I wonder what the kitsune and his exceedingly openminded host are scheming against the unsuspecting demon dog...