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person Lady Dimon
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I JUST LOVE U'R STORY AND I 1st READ IT IN FF.NET SO THEN I HAD TO READ IT HEAR TO SEE THE FULL VERSON OF IT AND IT WAS SO GEAT LOL HOPE U HAVE MORE OF THOUSE SUNED AND SEE YA!!!! ON MY NEXT REVIEW (WHEN I CAN REVIEW) LOL
person shaina
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
holy crap!! That was the best wedding night story i have ever read in my entire life! It was wonderful. By the way what exactly is the condition for shess' inheritence? I know it has something to do with him not seeing kagura, but i didn't really understand what they were talking about. I love you putting so many inuyasha and kagome scenes. More soon please.
person coolie star gyal
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ DIS STORY IS SO FUNNY
YO I LOVE IT , ITS SO ILL
WICKEDEST STORY IV READ SO FAR
I HOPE UR NOT DONE YET I REALLY WANT TO KNO WAT HAPPENS TO SESS AND KAGURA
KEEP UP DA GOOD WORK
~PEACE~ COOLIE STAR GYAL
person Thundercat
schedule July 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was truely beautiful!!!!
person szmadad
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I\beenbeen following this story at mediaminer and am glad that you've begun posting here.

Your latest chapter was *so satisfying*. (hentai that I am, I have a big silly grin on my face....ahh...full demon Inu is quite the dominating type, ne?) All along your characters have been so 3-D and believable beyond cliches. Your writing is at a level where you paint a wonderful picture of the relationships and situations while keeping the story moving along.

Inu-Kag are my favorite couple from the anime so I have to tell you that I'm happy they have finally consummated their relationship in your story....I'm glad you had Kagome hold out...even tho her grandfather's role in that has been funny - drugging Kagome ?! But you've set up both Inu and Kag so realistically regarding their growing feelings of love beyond lust for one another.

I know that the future will get a bit rough...being that both Inu and Ji-chan's conspiracy regarding their initial meetiill ill have to be explained. But I'm looking forward to how you will do that and restore Kag's faith in both men.

One thing that I hardly seen done in AUs that take place in the modern day....will you have somebody explain the depth of the youkai mating to Kagome? I mean, in most of the fanfics....Kagome never seems to know anything beyond youkyoukai mating for life and that there's a bite involved. In your story, are they bonded in some deep way?

This may help her realize that Inu does truly love her when she does find out the truth......

Looking forward todingding more from you :)
person drake220
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ok, is anyone else really REALLY jealous of kagome right now? because I am!!! ::whistles:: that was a great lemon! i think all the smut writers here at aff.net need a hand if they helped contribut to your imagination. ::applauds wildly:: and kag is right, visuals really are exciting! ;D nice job!!!!
person lady_siren
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please hurry up and update again. it has cought my intrest and i love it when i read a good story and i cant hardly take my eyes off of it! :D
person lady_siren
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
by the way i forgot to add....i really loved it when you made hojo guy lol way to go! he is one of my least fav.
person lady_siren
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! wright more soon!!! it is not aften that i ally lly love a story so much that i cant wait to read more!
person Hanyouluverr
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Finally, it took them long enough...jeez, good job, it coulnd't have been done any better, you are the best!!

Hanyouluverr