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person Anonymous666
schedule July 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Eeeek! I LOVE this fic to death! It's so GOOD! Update soon and keep up the good work! ^_^
person kitsuneonna
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap is this story good! I stayed up all night last night reading it! Totally solid characterization--very fleshed out and believable. And oh my stars and garters--an author who can juggle MORE THAN ONE PLOTLINE! This is a fantastic story and I'm dying to mor more!
person FrameofMind
schedule July 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sooo glad to see you've updated! You had me worried there for awhile after your account disappeared from ff.net, so I couldn't keep track of this story as easily as I to. to. Oh well -- that's life eh? Anyway, I'm delighted to see it's still going. I've missed this one so much!

That being said, excellent chapter! I can't wait to find out how Inuyasha manages to get himself out of this one, and I love the way Kagome reacted to the news and all. It's irrational, but believably so -- does that make sense? I mean, we all know Inuyasha loves her, but it's believable (and somewhat understandable, considering her personal fears and issues with relationships) that she would react as she did, even though she's wrong. Besides, it makes it a million times more fun than if she were to approach the situation from an objective and logical (albeit inhuman and un-Kagome-like) point of view, because then there would be no conflict, would there? Long story short -- I love it ;) Update soon!
person inu-fanforever
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't until I saw the update here, that I noticed that one of my favorite fics from ff.net was gone. So is Kagome pregnant and please let her forgive inuyasha.
person Numisma
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm guessing it was the masturbation scene in chapter 16 i think that might have alerted whoever reported you on ff. that, to me, was pushing the limits of an R rating. i love smut, but seriously, it was a bit explicit for what is allowed on ff, so ever since that chapter came out i had a feeling you might get booted for explicit content.
person Midoriko-sama
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry about Ff.net. Many of us got kicked for no reason whatsoever, and we faithful readers (not to mention the people on the GT forum) have followed you wherever you went. ^^ so never mind the snots, we still love every bf whf whay you write
person its good so far
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
it better not be one of those bad ending ones plz make them make up. lol i hate sad stories.
person Sunshiner
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sob*
person Assh
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just read the latest chapter and I am about to cry. I hate crying, damnit! Please don't let them end this way! Good Gawd, I am actually emulating here, feel for me a bit! I hope your stress level settles soon, I know how much that sucks. Good luck with writing the next chapters!
person drake220
schedule July 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
of course this story is about more then sex!!!!! really great sex but whatever! not the point!!!) i love this story adn you have kag/inu's relationship disintegration down pat. loved the angst and the sadness. but hello inu!!! its your damn kid INSIDE your damn mate and your too distraught to tell!?!?!?! ::whistles:: sesshomaru is going to have a FIELD day with this. hehehhehehe.....never shoulda done it. i warnnnneeedddd yoouuuuuuu! now sit in the shit that you caused. update soon! whats the next story your working on?