rate_review Reviews

wow that was a wonderful story, i cried, laughed and everything in between. this has to be one of my most fave stories off all time. i couldn't story reading it once i had to continue to find out what happend in the end. awesome job writing it, it was wonderful.

Okay. I've been a bad reader/reviewer. I didn't review at first because I was expecting the story to take a cheesy turn. Never happened. I saw your update. My memory hasn't been great lately, so I had to reread the story. It is a great story, well written, several plots running together keeping it interesting, humor, and the angst is great. Inuyasha as the playboy is great, but man, taking Kagura. That's pretty low. The courting, Inu's arguments with his youkai, Kagome's instinctual reciprocation was very inventive. Not that it hasn't been done before, but you did a good job. Poor Sess. You did a real number on him. It was nice to see him keep his cold demeanor and have emotions simultaneously. I'm glad to see more Sess/Kagura pairings out there. The whole idea of Hojo being gay was great. Inu's references to him were amusing. I liked the relationship you gave Kanna and Kagura. Your portrayal of all the characters were great, especially Souta's abilities with clothing. Rin lying? Gasp. Sneaky little wench. And, pairing her and Souta was a great idea. Kagura's reaction was priceless. There is so much of this story I like that I couldn't possibly put all of it here. Suffice it to say, you held my interest with great characters, an excellent but simple plot, although I was a bit confused about Sesshoumaru's 'condition', and you have excellent grammar and spelling (mostly). Of course, no one is perfect in that last area! I'm picky, hard to please. You did a great job.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave

EEEPPPP!!!! your story I have read it several times before both on AFF and FF.net.... And I thought it was very good but with parts missing (AFF)was confusing in places.... NOW it is super missing chunks and parts!!!! If you have a copy of your story maybe you could compare where you are missing and re-instate the missing parts- other than that I really love the story.... Must If I re-read it...

are you missing the bottom part of ch11? "night of spontenantieititity"?

Could you please fix the chapters on 'The Ad'? Almost ALL of the chapters are broken down, and I would really appreciate if you fixed the problem. Thank you.

- Parapsychic Psycho

repost the story
because it miss things when you read
but i love story great job

Darn AFFN corruption...I just read your author's note at the end of chapter 14, and realized that thanks to the corruption, it means I missed something somewhere in the previous chapters...

This story is fabulous! I started reading it from the beginning and the only thing that made me stop was realizing I had work in the morning and even then I kept reading for a couple more hours. Unfortunatly I also realized that with the site problems some of the text has be truncated (especially in chapter 11). I've noticed this occuring in other stories and figured I would bring it to your attention since you seem to have lost a large chunk of the chapter I mentioned before...and I need to know just what happened...it plagues me...and with a story this wonderfull I hate to lose any of it! Keep up the great work and I'll continue to read what you write!

Hey, I just wanted to let you know that something weird is going on with "Th Ad". It's like half of some chapters have been deleted, or the names are mixed up (I've read it before and have noticed this when trying to re-read it), or it'll have computer code in the story. I haven't seen that with other stories. Do you have any idea what it may be? Has anyone else noticed this?

for some reason, i liked the alternate ending better