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person Pixie Elf
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Pretty cool story, I like you take on relationships, I hope Inuyasha grows up.
person Mega Man
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for posting such an good story to read i was getting worried because this website is starting to get flitered with a lot un entertaining stories.
person Little Inu
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see hows this story all plays out in the end.
person Kag1986
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey why did you not continue the scene with kagome and Inuyasha in the woods?
why did you stop there?
will there be any flushbacks?

but nervertheless
great, amazing and funny story
person Atropa
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have been following this story on FF.net.
I am glad to see it here as well... I love the story, it is very hot all the chapters I have been reading. Will you be adding some extra here on AFF? I know FF is kind of strict when it comes to lemons these days... Any how... it is still very good story...
person hi
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
chapter 3 and 4 are the same thing. their both chapter 4.... :( i wanted to read the water scene. but it's really good so far. i hope u update again soon!!!
person Takhisis
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
new to the site, I really enjoyed your fic!!! please update soon, I'm dying to know what will happen next!! ^_^