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by nena

person Cancan227
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AW! thats so sweet!
person shaina
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
yes!! I can't wait to see inuyasha on his knees begging. I absolutely love this story. The lake scene was my favorite scene between inuyasha and kagome, even though it did seem that you were building up for some sort of climax and then let hang there. More soon please.
person saphir kitsune youkai girl
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love it. You don't have a lot of reviews but don't get discourage
'cause I find your story awfullw good! Update soon. Can't wait to see
how Kagome will react in the morning!
person InDI23
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great story...........please update as soon as possible!
im dying to read how kag will react in the morning...
probably some morning games????
or an ugly fight? ...im so curious!!

please UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Alabaster Dragon
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is proabably one of the best written stories I have ever read. Your writing flows off the pages and your characterization is one of the best!!! Amazing simply Amazing!!!!!
person Ring Master
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really can say only one word that's described this story, AWESOME!!!!
person TLC
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Truly a wonderful story. From the plot line to the characters I don't think there is any wrong with this story. I think you would make Rumiko Takahashi proud knowing that her characters can be portrayed the way you did it. I love Inuyasha seeing Inuyasha as a sexy playboy but at the same time I believe the way you have your characters grow throughtout makes the story that much better. I would also like to tell you that this fic is going to be on my all time favorites list. The way you write give me goosebumps your that good I hope you don't think I am a pyscho or something because of that.
person Albino Elf
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Everything about this story screams perfect, I love you byplay of Inuyasha and Kagome I think you have a great grasp for adult situations ie meaning the sex is looked at in the 21st century!
person Supercool
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very good. I look forward to seeing more of this one.
person Big Bad Wolf
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like it alot. your writing is awesome.