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by nena

schedule March 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this was a great story! i promise i'll read your other stories, however i read this straight through and since it is now 5am i'll read the rest later.
person suki
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story you should do a sequal! keep up the good work
person drake220
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story! (though the epilouge is not the last chapter)
great, great story!!!
person Animefreak242
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chap. 13 - I knew Souta was dating Rin. It was kind of obvious since he was at the game. But that's cte... Not many authors put them together. ^_^

Well, I loved this chapter - well, the whole story really. *hands you a cookie* I hope Kagome and Inuyasha make it through their fight all right. Though this means they're getting closer. But I wonder what the fight between Sesshomaru, Kagura and Kagome's Jii-san was about... Well, he and Sesshomaru seem to have patched things up. I hope they stay tha way...

Oh, one more question. Do you address what happened to Kagome to make her loose her memory? It obviously wasn't the accident in which her parents died (though you don't talk about her mother). I was just wondering what happened...

Again, great chapter. I'll continue reading now but I hope you write more (and proof read/spell check) later. Sorry about the short review. Ja mata~!

~Animefreak242
aka
Kawaii Girl
person Jeszie
schedule November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just thought I'd let you know that I thought this story was wonderful. I happened to come across it today while searching for something new to read.... now I usually don't read stories with so many chapters... but I must inform you that the ten hours I spent reading this story was well worth it! I loved this story!
person Lea
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i absolutely LUB it!!!
person Lita
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I almost died reading this story it was so good. I loved every chapter, every .. everything about it. I certianly reccomend it to everyone who loves the series. (:
person Kikia
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow..that was a excellent story.I cried at the end but i was really happy to see the surprise.I think that was an really great story and you, the author has an amazing talent.I cant wait for another one of your stories.
person SailorTee
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohmigod!!! I just started reading this today and I couldn't stop reading til I finished .
This was such A well written and detailed story.
This story was absoluletly the best story I've read in a HOT minute
I have 2 say you're a good author and I can't wait to read some of your other stories
Keep up the good work!!!
person GWPH
schedule May 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story was wounderful. I've been readying it sence you posted the first chapter. I don't think this story could of been any better than what it was. Congrates on the completion and I look forward to reading more of you stories.

Till Next Time,
GWPH