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November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must be a guy. That was very poorly thought out.
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October 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I don't even have to say it, since so many others said it for me. You need to rewrite this. I mean, it's been a few years since you first posted it, so now maybe you have some actual sexual experience and can see your mistakes. If not, then read some good yuri like HAP's or watch decent lesbian porn. Better yet, just delete it until you do gain some.
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February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story! Need to write more.
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December 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*_* I actually liked it! No! Loved it! who would've thought this made such a sexy story. update pleez.
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT.....i can't believe kikkyo would be kinky enough to have sex with kagome against her own will...but i think it was so AWSOME....i want the next chapter up as soon as possible.........
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey good story hope u update soon and good story
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December 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue the story!!!!!!!!!!!!
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August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I goota admit, not that good
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
http://www.godawful.net/forums/viewtopic.php?t=15426
Godawful fanfiction, you fucking moron.
Godawful fanfiction, you fucking moron.
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think you got your chapters out of order