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Cool! It was really sad...but really good! Great story!

OMG! That is exactly how I imagined the series would end! O.O I loved it dearly and can't wait to read more of your stories. This one was truely incredible for your first songfic.

a bit corny, and too fluffy for MY tastes. also unnerves me that it's a bit too similar to another work i've read. lastly, it doesn't take that short of a while before a child is conceived. at that point in time, all Inuyasha would probably be able to smell is his own cum settling inside her, and it would be several weeks before the embryo had a heartbeat. most likely it would have to be a couple to a few days before he could detect the change in scent in her...

The thought of leaving a review for this story coats my mouth with a bad taste. It has come to my attention that your story is extremely similar to another story on this site. The coincidences, and I use that term loosely because I know better, that occur simply make me cringe. If you were inspired by another authors story, common courtesy and decency would demand that you place an authors note in your story thanking said author for motivating your muse to produce your story.

This is so strange..... I just got through having to sing this song and later get on the site to see a story of the so THI THIS IS FANTASTIC!!