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for A slave's story

by Kagomechan

person Zelix
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh boy, this is getting good... thank you for updating and i hope to read another chapter soon, this story is GOOD!
person Anaidil
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks a lot for the update...I was really counting on it. I like this story. It’s also sad how poor Kagome was treated but we all hope that Inuyasha is the cure for all of her torments. Update as soon as you can PLEASE!!!!!
person Anaidil
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!! POR FAVOR!!!!!!!
person Serena63083
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story keep writing! it is so cute that inuyasha gets all soft around her ^.-
person Scorpinac
schedule June 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing. Hard to tell where this is going right off the bat, but should get interesting before it's through.
person jem
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEAH!! YOU UPDATED!!! I am now very happy! WHOOT!
person JD
schedule June 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*applaudes(sp?)*

Great story. I've read more descriptive ones, but this is truly an original, and to me, originality counts for more than a slight lacking in details. Most of the fanfiction I read is mostly sex/love stories with little or no story, which is usually pointless anyway, and, even though pairings, content, and degree of detail changes, they all start to seem a like after a while. This deserves the score I'm giving it and more, a 5... out of 5.
person Peacemaker
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.4 was very good and the emotions that you had the characters feel were right on the money. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Contessa
schedule June 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!
person Rei
schedule June 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story is interesting can you please email me when you update eh and can you put the title so i know its from you? well see ya in the next chapter im lookin forward to it