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for A slave's story

by Kagomechan

person Anon
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good Job! It's funny about how you write how Kagome Holds onto Inuyasha while she's SLEEPING...oh well. it's your story =D
D.I.
person Contessa
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
person luckyducky7too
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome. I would probably be just as traumatized. But great story! Please update soon.
person starlit333
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great chapter. I have a suspicion that Kagome's going to scream or be very quiet out of fear when she wakes up the next morning. Please update soon!
~starlit333
person Peacemaker
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah ch.5 is here and it was another great one. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Contessa
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll definitely be waiting for the next chapter.
person Serena63083
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it!! love it!! this is a gorgeous story, I shoud know I have read fanfiction for 8 years and it is absoulutely beautiful!
keep writing!!
person ME
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this was a good story and i cant waite to read the next chapter please update soon!
person Fala
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter.
person Scorpinac
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I think this is forward movement. Remember, my fellow, patience is a virtue. (Okay, maybe not for him...) Laters!