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for A slave's story

by Kagomechan

person KitKat
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is wonderful!!!! Plz write more im just dying to read it!!!!!!! ^_^

~KitKat
person Serena63083
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Finally she comes out of her shell, a little. YaY! the scene with the fish was so cute, its very easy to picture -.^ cute chapter and could the person be Kouga or is it the guy Inuyasha rescued her from?
person Peacemaker
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was an excellent chapter and it had a good amount of plot. Also, now we will get to see if Inuyasha can hang on to Kagome in the future. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Blade
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its a good story but what happens next?
person Peacemaker
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.6 was a nice easy to read chapter that I enjoyed very much. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Zelix
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, good developement pace you have here, nice work, update soon again, okay?
person Scorpinac
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
At leas she's improving. that's progress, right? But how soon will they have until Ryu comes round with a mob or two? Oh, well, thoughts for another time. Laters!
person Fala
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Its nice to see that she's at least comfortable with him when she's asleep.
person chanda
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow what a great chapter. I'm glad Kagome starting to trust Inuyahsa.
I would have said awaken not woke.. but that's just me..

Please update soon..
Chanda
person mel
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loven it!!! it's different and it's great. gotta say i am hooked. i cant wait for the next chapter. oh and please do continue this story all the way through to completion. i really want to know how you plan to end this story.