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by Kagomechan

person Contessa
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update the next chapter asap!
person starlit333
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Inuyasha wasn't able to save her? Kagome's being taken away?! I think I'm going to cry for Kagome! Poor Kagome! That bastard Ryu, I hope he burns in hell! And I hope Inuyasha will be able to save her before she's forced to *ahem* Ryu. Please update soon! This is really good!
~starlit333
person Serena63083
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter!!! I love this story!!! That was quite the little smoke screen that Ryu pulled off.
person Fallen_Angel_Of_Darkness
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good fic and I very much enjoyed reading it until this point. I hope that Kagome warms up to Inuyasha a bit more and Miroku deserves to be hit a LOT harder then before for touching Kagome. Also I think that maybe Sesshomaru would be able to make an apearince later on in the fic... anyways I should be going, Ja ne
person starlit333
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a good chapter. Please update soon! Inuyasha's not going to let Kagome go, is he? He better not! I'll cry! I feel so bad for Kagome, I'd probably be like her if shit like that happened to me, too. ~starlit333
person Morgan
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ooh! Cliffy! I hate you! Nah, I was just kiding. I don't hate you. Please update soon. I love your fic! -Thanks
person Contessa
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it.
person Scorpinac
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice to see her getting healthier and less frightened, but what was that saying about old dogs and new tricks? And the other one about old habits and dying hard? And as to the ending, this cannot be good. Can't wait to see which scumbag with a death wish is coming for her. Laters!
person mel
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice update. hope to see more from you again soon.
person Fala
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the cliffhanger for this chapter.