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for A slave's story

by Kagomechan

schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!! pllzzzz you must must must update its really good and if you want you can check out my new story i dont accept flames but i could use some pointers mean or nice its my first story NO where near as good as yours but its called A Hanyou's Lust look it up i would really enjoy it oh and plzzzzzzzzzzz dont forget to update!!! you get a 5 if i could rate any higher i would!!! bye ^_^
person lost child
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey I had lost this story when it only had chapter 3....I'm so glad I found it and that you've been updating it. I hope you continue to update cuz I ain't letting this story outta my sight again.
person mia
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOO!!! why did you have to end it like that??? i thought i was gonna cry. *sob* *sob*!! wow you are so great. please keep up the GREAT work. and update SOONER!!! >LATER
person Peacemaker
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was another great chapter to add to your collection. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
person Serena63083
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I though you left us for good, what would I do? I'd have to get a life *shudders*...anyway thanks for updating. I suppose he has to start at square one.
person Scorpinac
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
About time, and good riddance to him! May he forever burn in the infernal pit of eternal damnation! As for Kagome's condition, I think the term "Back to the ol' drawing board!" seems fairly accurate, but hey, I could be wrong... Laters!
person animegirl93
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL CLIFFY!!!I HATE YOU!!!!UPDATE!!!!UUUPPPPPDDDAAAAAAATTTTTEEEEEEEE!!!
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My god. Death a little too quick, but InuYasha mete'd jsutice properly.


I adore this story. I crave more, at your leisure
person Emi
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww... i like the little fluffyness! ^^ it's cute
person Fala
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the rescue.