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for Dreams do come true

by Elysant

person someone
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
good story
person lilladyINUfan
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
PLZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ another?
ill go crazy if i dont read another soon
person gittelbug
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
lol good they blew out the candle that would suck if a fire started and they are naked too. anywho great chapter update soon!!
person Kaleigh
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes. I am reviewing this... erm uh... I think you called it 'lemonade'?
Great story so far! i'm real captured into it. keep up the good work and keep eating airheads
:-p lol
person jules
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh Yeah! a LEMON!! and very well done ... got any more AirHeads (hint hint). Again your story is AWESOME. Having the story mainly in Inu's point of view is SO COOL...I love it when Kag dominates his thoughts (like she should in the anime-lol).
person katrina
schedule July 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
this story is awesome please write more I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Contessa
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I decided I would finallyiew iew since you finally gave us a lemon, but do you think you can do us a favor and put out another chapter before the day is over with? Your fans would really appreciate it if you did.
person Inu-chan
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOO! not again! I can't wait for nex next chap anymore! * dies waiting* X_X great story tho
person valene
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
what a woohoo story, totally creative im loving it...update fast -k-...*_*
person Zelix
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow... that was worth the wait alright, full 5 stars! Damn good lemon, hope there are more! (Being a lemon fan as i am...heh) the story is good and the charcters are excellent, nice job!