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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I think you have a very good story here and that is all I can say.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent, Bravo, I praise you for writing an awesome, cool, great, Story!
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I wish you wouls have killed Inuyasha then I would have been able to claim my woman, JK I think you are very talented writer.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice story, very sad though.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent start, your are an amazing writer and can't wait until you post more of this soon.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an amazing opening chapter that was and now I am patiently awaiting the next chapter.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW! That has to be one of the longest chapters I have ever read and it was so powerful too, I felt Kagome feelings so much and your take on him forgetting himself you proabably be refreshing consider a lot of people try using that plot but with your writing it is going to be Cool>
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great Start! Loved how you made Inuyasha so valunerable.
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June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very Powerful chapter and you write beauitfully, I am totally hooked.