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for Night time

by Atropa

person Inkikokoro
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've only made it to #22, but they're wonderful, Atropa! #22 is my absolute favourite, it's really amazing. A great story building up to the lemon (I love the entire shower scene, before and after Sango joined in). It was really done very well. I can't wait to read more. I sadly have work tomorrow, so I have to wait until tomorrow evening to read the rest. What a day of toture it's going to be tomorrow! lol. Anyway, keep up the FANTASTIC work!
person friend
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it
person fan of Sango
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.K. hears my idea I think it would be really cool if you could wright one more night time but at a farm?
The reason I wont write it is because I am not a vary good story teller(sobs).
o.k. hears the blue prints Inuyasha is looking for a job and finds a add looking for a strong person on a farm and he goes to adition.
Sango's father owns the farm and she does most of the hard work like tranng the mustanges.
And you can take it from there.
person Angel
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I love your stories...there are good... I love Inuyasha and Sango together... they make a good couple....I read all the chapters for night time... and onces I started I couldn't stop...Now I should go to sleep...lol...
person anonymous
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your work, Atropa!!
person Extremely Rare
schedule August 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was good, and I have to say I've been a long time admirer of you work, specially the Inu/Sango stuff, my favorite pair myself, you've done one bang up job, but I don't think you let Sango get on top enough, hahaha my first time reviewing your work but not my last, so as I say to all the greats, and you truly are overdue for this, You funking rule!
person sakura
schedule August 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice i like chapater 34 hope you go on with the chapters,why! because i love sango and inuyasha storys and your a awsome writer so please make more storys and go on with them already!!!!!!!!
person Dunbarbalooie2
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excelent chapter from a true master of the story. ^^ This was a very well written chapter, ignoring a few minor grammar and context mistake. I give it a 8.75 out of 10. I actually like the not quite lemon of this one. It's good to not go all the way once in a while, but don't make a habit of it. lol jk
person F-Zero Hero
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I looked at your site. I really like the design!I read some of your Naruto fics. I really like them!^_^ I was wondering, could you make a NaruSaku one-shot collection like Night Time? I really can't wait to see what your next story will be o' Great Lemon King! ;)
person Random Person
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great story idea keep up the good work!!!