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for Night time

by Atropa

person Kiranta
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another nice 1 shot.
person ducusdraconis
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yet again another marvelous story.(ch. 23)
person Shouri
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You should've seen my face when I found out about this new one-shot. I was like, OMG.... YAY!!! Anyway, this one was so cute. I just loved that 'Lady Bitch-Slap' incident... And as usual.... I can't wait for the next one. GOOD JOB!!! AS ALWAYS!
person ShoeMan
schedule January 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
these are so good!!! i only read the first few but they were awesome, and i especially liked the first one!
person christal-chan
schedule January 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed this
keep on update
update soon
person DJ
schedule January 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like em' keep going, Doing great so far
person smiles
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it, i really really liked it! it was very very good and fits my taste, as do all the other stories u write wit sango in them. PLease continue writing more and more and more, hehehehe! I have an idea, why not have sango a police officer and inuyasha a supposedly criminal, and she is on a case and knows he didn't kill someone but was framed and so she seeks him out to gain his trust, and instead she gains more then that, and so they get to know each otehr and share a passionate nite, then sango quites her job as a cop cus the police r after inuyasha and she loves him, so they run away together and hide from the police, hehehe its prefect...well maybe not taht good...it woudl have ot be very long and i don't know if it would fit, hmmmm.....well anyways u decide!

-smiles everyone
person KenYasha
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh, to be with Inuyasha in the shower ... I DO envy Sango a lot ;)))
great writing! I love your stories!
person Kiranta
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, even thought you didn't completely use my idea, I'll let it slide. Nice 1shot there.
person Zelix
schedule January 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That latest story, i loved it, excellent stuff, keep it up!