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Wow. And the hits keep coming. That story was so sweet, (young love) it reminded me of the movie, Blue Lagoon. if you haven't seen it, it's the story of two kids stranded on a deserted island, they grow up and figure out their sexuality together. I guess they just got horny and screwed each other. Anyways, their mating produced a child, since they were in an island they had to travel to a different island to get different kind of foods. Again, anyways, on one of this trips to the other island their son, (less then a year old) eats some poison berries (he doesn't die though), but the two now teens think their kid is dead. They find some of the berries in the boat and eat them as well, I should mention that they lost their paddels (their in a row-boat), so they drift under the heated eye of the sun. Eventually they are found (I think a few hours or days not sure) by the kids father (I think...or is it Grand father) who has been surching for them all along. The rescue ship sends a boat to get the little row-boat near the ship, when they discover the teens in there they think they are dead, but then they check their pulse and find they are all still alive. That is how the movie ends, It is a great movie. The kids learn to live together, work together, grow up together, discover things (such as emotions and feelings) together, and finally learn to become a family. Did i mention that the islands are on shark infested water. I don't think so, and that is why I am not a good story teller. Anyways, this story reminded me a lot of the movie, so I was a bit curious if this was some how based on the movie, or if it was just all coincidence. Love your stories, and may you write many more. ^_^

28 was absolutely breathtaking. I loved that they were learning and exploring together. So sweet... Can't wait until you update!

Awww that was sooo sweet!!

i think this is one of the most beautiful sango/inuyahsa stories i have ever read!!!!! =) thank you

I love your stories. You know what would make a good story, a Koagu and older Rin lemons. Oh ya more Inu-yasga abd Rin ones too! Keep up the good work!

Damn, another great one-shot of my favorite couple. I love all of your stories, please write more. Thank you, your fan -Saiyan God ^_^

Damn, that was a great story, the ending was kind-off humorous. Love it keep it up. ^_^

*Pooks head out from hole which is hidden by a rock* Excellent chapter, shame I'm still trying to write, or I would of jumped at the chance to continue this. *hears someone coming* O.O Gotta go before old Fluffy finds me! *Moves back down into hole and puts rock back in place*

Wow. man, you are like a machine or the energyzer bunny, you just keep writing and writing. That was a good story, loved it from beggining to end. You rock!!^_^

your chapter 27 night time rocks!!! but then so do you!! =) i love it!!!! you have a gift!!!