rate_review Reviews

Weelll. The ironic thing about the demons in Inuyasha is that they do not act the parts of the animal they are. For instance.. Inuyasha has shone more dog like behavior than Sesshoumaru ever has.

Great as always. I was Mystic-ice, but changed my name. Your fic rocks, be sure to update.

I don't remember which name I've reviewed under.
Sorry I haven't review lately I've been kind of out of it. I'm still reading the story and still very interested in what is happening. I've noticed a few more gramatical errors than usual, but that really has no bearing on the story. I really like the story and I am eagerly awaiting the discussoin with Inuyasha. Keep up the good work.

Interesting preview for chapter 12.

I don't think you're doing anything wrong at all. We all, as readers, knew that once sessho and Kagome returned to their rightful time, things would get difficult and would not be as... if you can call it that, simplistic in this story. I mean, InuYasha is going to freak! Not to mention that I'm interested in how this whole Kikyo thing is going to be solved. (I despise Kikyo... she's a bitch) I'm eagar to find out about what the hell is going to happen with Sessho's mother and if, by chance, the three of them (Inu/Kag/Sess) can truly work this whole thing out. I'm psyched! I can't wait for the next update! I love all of your stories and this and Kagome Where Are You? is becoming one of my favorites! Ja ne!

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What are you doing wrong, you ask? Well, I'll tell you my version of it. I've been reading 'Kagome! Where Are You!' from the beginning, but I've never really liked it (and that's why I've never reviewed before now). And from your persistent notes, I got the impression that you are extremely full of yourself. All the notes you made were very borand and persistent and stupid. WE DON'T NEED TO KNOW! Keep your history to yourself. And your sex scenes weren't even worth remembering. They were just Kago and Sess fucking eachother. Although you mentioned it multiple times, about character development. What. the. fuck? What character development? There was none. And all your aristocratic crap about Sess's demon life and hierarchy and whatnoto gio gives a flying fuck? Not me! The only thing that kept me reading was to see what stupid world you would come up with next. The only reason I am still reading is... Hell! I don't even know why I'm still reading this piss poor excuse for a story! But, I guess it's b/c I don't like to quit halfway througmethmething. And thast cst chapter! What the fuck was that? Have you ever even taken a proper English class? Where is your structure and metaphors and similies and heart wrenching descriptions of Kagome and Sesshomaru's passionate love for eachother??? You draw everything out waaaaaaaaaaay to long and that makes it waaaaaaaaaaaaaay to boring. Be short, concise and to the point. Don't draw everything out so long. Why in the seven hells am I giving advice to you? I must be going soft in my ripe old age of sixteen. When you get this I hope you go crying to your mommy because I'm not even close to being mean. I don't have the heart to be truly nasty to some poor fuck who's convinced he can actually write good fanfiction. Poor baby! I dearly hope you enjoyed my 'constructive criticism.' Bye for now. And I hope I hear from you in the future. I refuse to give you my e-mail address. Only those deemed worthy can have it. And from all my ranting and raving above, I think you can probably guess that doesn't include you. Write me a note at the end of a chapter or something. Hey, it's one way of making sure I keep checking the story's progress, thenthen again, why would I give a flying fuck about some poor son-of-a-bitche's ramblings about mean people. I think that I've given you enough to think about for now, so I'm going to leave you and your piss poor excuse for a brain to ponder all that I have said. I have spoken. (Good Lord, and I thought YOU were full of yourself...)

Why!? why did Sweet Koga have to die?*starts bawling*Good story i guess....poor koga

I like your story. It is very interesting. I also liked your story Kagome, where are you? Keep updating please.

Nothing actually in my eyes. I just haven't had the time to review but this is a great Story. Better than the story it's linked to! I LOVE THEM BOTH!! (huggles a Sesshomaru plushie) Sesshomaru getting a mate. FINALLY!!

THe story's great ,but I mise che character developement from the first story.